|Reviews for Extra Terrestrial|
| coadhpgg chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
Why the cliffy?! WHY
| melverdeenforever219 chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
Absolutely love this story! Cant wait to find out whet happens next!
| coadhpgg chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
| melverdeenforever219 chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
This the story is SO awesome! I mean Peeta is so cute and quirky. Oh please update quick! PLEASE!
| dearlyfantastical5511 chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
Really cool fic! Like the idea! Can't wait for the next update!
| coadhpgg chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
| Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
[ Before thinking, I rush outside, closing the door "lightly" and rush to the light, which stuns me into place.]
This is a bit clunky. Also, why is 'lightly' in quotes? If you mean the opposite, just write that.
[A seventeen foot door opens. Like a spaceship.]
I think these two phrases are supposed to be together and even then, the comparisons don't make sense. How is a seventeen-foot door like a spaceship? Then the next sentence reveals that it IS a spaceship.
The rest is rather confusing. So Peeta's an alien, but he looks exactly like a human. So much so that he could easily pass off as one, and is able to make himself understood and shares the exact same mannerisms and language as people on Earth. Is it necessary that he be an alien from space?
| Catiepeeps chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Continue! This is Catiepeeps by the way. I'm just too lazy to log in.
| coadhpgg chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
| God'sgirlforever chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
| nerdsrock chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Omgg if i woke up and a guy was in bed with me i would punch him and run away lol
| coadhpgg chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This is such an awesome originoal Idea! Keep it up! And update soon!
| God'sgirlforever chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
YES! Please continue. I wanna know what happens next.
| gabz1197 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
yes, continue please :) A little weird, but I like it