Reviews for Sins of the Father (REDUX)
Bagel-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
This is what should have happened in the show. Absolutely beautifully written and in character too!
cindy4651 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Lovely! The story couldn't have been written with Arthur in character, because he's too dependent on Uther's approval. But I'm glad you wrote it despite Arthur's dependency!
Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
This story has everything, from angst and inner hurt to a the subtle humor that somehow fits perfectly among the jumbled up feelings and emotional confessions.
A touching tale that leaves quite an impression on the reader.
TiffBaby101 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
beautiful. that would have been great if this had happened.
Moon Fox chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Really enjoyed this AU version of that episode.
Helca Maica chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Oooh! That was refreshing! Nothing better than a wonderfull Merlin reveal-fic to start your day! :D
Seriously, I loved it. The way you handled Arthur's psychology and the way Merlin interfered when his rage consumed him was magnificent! And the way the actual reveal happened...! Let's just say it's what all of the Merlin fans need something like this now and then. It keeps the grief at bay. It's like medicine or coffee, both needed and an incurable obssession, can't go on without them...! Only it's in the form of a reveal fic!
Brilliant writting!

Cheers! :D
Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Awesome story!
I just watched the episode and I just had to read a fanfiction that revealed magic within that episode.
Thank you for writing and posting.
You might like to know this was my first time reading a Merlin Fanfic ;)
Midwinter Sun chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
:) I just watched The Wicked Day for the first time so this was exactly what I needed to heal my withering feels. This was fantastic (although I will say it needs to be edited). Very in-character. You were a bit right about Gaius, butGaius and Dumbledore probably use time travel to go golfing together on Tuesdays, so it didn't really bother me. I also loved the depth you added to Merlin's backstory.
001011100010111000101110001111 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
I loved it... But... What happened tho Uther? It seems like you forgot about him during Merlin's monologue... thing. Yeah.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
i like it very much. at some point i thought what happened with utter?they are talking too much!
and i like how it began with the most angry an tensius moment and then all ended whit the two laughing(forget my english)
Insanityisgood25 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013


There was a few grammatical errors (I'm a bit picky about things like that-sorry! ;) ) like not a space between words and small things like that. Nothing to worry about too much but just one of my pet peeves which gets me into no end of trouble :)

Hope to read more of you work!

Insanity x
NormalsBoring chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
this was just soooo great
deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This was .Giggles*grin*
kitkat chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I love this! Great job, I can definitely see this happening!
SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This isn't crap, this is brilliant. Please do a sequel and then a series!
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