Reviews for Steal My Thunder God |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This feels incredibly slow developing for 100k words. Im 80% into it and I dont think a week has gone by in fiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm. I dont understand why kushina losing kyuubi kills her, but naruto losing it is just fine. If you wanted a naruto in the past without the kyuubi, then I would say this is the wrong approach. |
![]() ![]() Still peak after all this time |
![]() ![]() found myself remembering this fic last night; was quite the surprise to discover it had been 10 years already... it was fun to reread it, even after all this time. it aged well! very cool premise still hope you have a good year! |
![]() ![]() Author-chan, please write more of this, I beg of you, it's very good! |
![]() ![]() You do know ambrosia is for the greek gods right? This is an interesting story, I can't wait to read more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. I saw on your profile that it's not completely abandoned, so I hope to see some continuation at some point, especially I want to see the meeting with the clan heads. I could tell you that I would accept the abandonment after that scene, but it would probably turn out to be a lie once that's over, even if it's true now. By the way, I love that you make Naruto close to the Uchiha to the complete disgust of everyone else, Fugaku would be very amused by Hiruzen's irritation, I'm sure xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dropped fic! I can't help it anymore! I love long fics but I've already read most of the completed fics. I need to find some other source! There's only Ao3, Wattpad & |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait wait wait wait wait! So Minato lives? I hope he does. |
![]() ![]() Was rereading my favs from this fandom, and I gotta say, this is probably the top! It’s just soooo fucking well written, and I feel it really captures the spirit and essence of the characters. I’d love for it to be updated one day, but probably won’t be. Regardless one of my favs forever, you guys did great! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this history |
![]() ![]() ![]() U fucking idiot there is no orange/yellow/your shit flash He disappears without effect |
![]() ![]() Your depiction of Naruto is completely false. Here, he is depicted as a child — despite being 23 and soon to be hokage — when that is completely wrong. When Naruto was slated to be the next hokage, he was a more mature level-headed man. Here, he is more emotional than his genin self |
![]() ![]() Sarutobi is a truly disgusting man. |