Reviews for Roommates
whitebengal14 chapter 8 . 12/8/2014

But they haven't told each other they love each other yet! D: And is Cyclonus definitely not leaving? Also, they haven't told each other they love each other yet! I'd like to at least see something like that before the fic ends. D:

Also, tbh Rung mentioned some things to both of them during this chapter. I feel like it was a lead to the rest of the story's progress. Like, them doing everything Rung suggested when he talked to both of them about feelings and relationships. I thought that's what you had originally planned with you introduced Rung and his appointments with both of them.

Regardless, this was a really enjoyable fic and I really like you protested both Cyclonus and Tailgate.

Also omg forever to Rodimus never getting Tailgate's name right. xD
whitebengal14 chapter 7 . 12/8/2014
I love rung so much. xD
whitebengal14 chapter 5 . 12/8/2014
whitebengal14 chapter 4 . 12/8/2014
Awww... This fic is so cute. :3
Guest chapter 8 . 11/3/2014
Sorry just a suggestion but I honestly think that it would be real great if ya you know did another chapter with tailgate spiking cyclonus ya know cause he always seems to be the one bottoming you really don't have to after all you seemed to have abandoned this one don't change know but ay if ya wanna. Just a suggestion that's all
Firewolves16 chapter 8 . 10/16/2014
This is cute. I'd love to see Tailgate's reaction to Cyclonus saying he loves him.
naomi.barker.1253 chapter 7 . 7/11/2014
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SteelBlastBee chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
My feels. This fanfic. WHERE'S THE REST OF IT? D: Anyway, love the fic! I was kind of expecting Tailgate's cybercrosis to show up to complicate things but oh well, the story is great either way XD

Hope you update soon! :D
Cannonade chapter 8 . 9/16/2013
Man this fic is so adorable! Just finished reading all 8 chapters now and I really hope you plan to continue with this, it's lovely. A very good account of their relationship.

PS. I love that fact that you actually write an author's note when their isn't any porn, as opposed to when there is! XD
electro moonlight chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
ohhhh cant wait to see more.
zrexheartz chapter 8 . 8/25/2013
Awww well that was umm a nice talk
DarkLoonatic chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Let me tell you right here and right now that this story is the most cutest, and most fanboy/girl squealing read ever and when I saw this was the last chapter I almost died on the inside. I understand if you are busy though and you have your other story to work on but this story needs to be continued! Please contact me if u need help ill be willing to assist you! This neess to be finished! :)
Cjade chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Aww! I loved it!

Suggestion: Go be the comic a little. Have Overlord try to rape him but Cyclonus save him. After Overlord incident have Ratchet check on him and they find that he has the cybercrosis.
Foxyperv chapter 8 . 8/5/2013
mmmmh... it sounds to me like there could be some interesting plot revolving around Tailgate's bad memories
plus, it'd be nice to see more of their relationship development
finally, I must admit I hadn't understood Cyclonus was staying after all, I thought that would have been another arc, he didn't say it to Rodimus, no?
musical-artist94 chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
I love what you have written so far with this story. Cyclonus and Tailgate are written so well.

And if you want any ideas to continue I also think you could use plot lines from the later comics. Especially after issue 15, where theres a lot more drama going on.
It could fit with your story in furthering Cyclonus and Tailgate's relationship.
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