|Reviews for Roommates|
| SteelBlastBee chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
My feels. This fanfic. WHERE'S THE REST OF IT? D: Anyway, love the fic! I was kind of expecting Tailgate's cybercrosis to show up to complicate things but oh well, the story is great either way XD
Hope you update soon! :D
| Cannonade chapter 8 . 9/16/2013
Man this fic is so adorable! Just finished reading all 8 chapters now and I really hope you plan to continue with this, it's lovely. A very good account of their relationship.
PS. I love that fact that you actually write an author's note when their isn't any porn, as opposed to when there is! XD
| electro moonlight chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
ohhhh cant wait to see more.
| zrexheartz chapter 8 . 8/25/2013
Awww well that was umm a nice talk
| DarkLoonatic chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Let me tell you right here and right now that this story is the most cutest, and most fanboy/girl squealing read ever and when I saw this was the last chapter I almost died on the inside. I understand if you are busy though and you have your other story to work on but this story needs to be continued! Please contact me if u need help ill be willing to assist you! This neess to be finished! :)
| Cjade chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Aww! I loved it!
Suggestion: Go be the comic a little. Have Overlord try to rape him but Cyclonus save him. After Overlord incident have Ratchet check on him and they find that he has the cybercrosis.
| Foxyperv chapter 8 . 8/5/2013
mmmmh... it sounds to me like there could be some interesting plot revolving around Tailgate's bad memories
plus, it'd be nice to see more of their relationship development
finally, I must admit I hadn't understood Cyclonus was staying after all, I thought that would have been another arc, he didn't say it to Rodimus, no?
| musical-artist94 chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
I love what you have written so far with this story. Cyclonus and Tailgate are written so well.
And if you want any ideas to continue I also think you could use plot lines from the later comics. Especially after issue 15, where theres a lot more drama going on.
It could fit with your story in furthering Cyclonus and Tailgate's relationship.
| DarkshadowXsunny-sides chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Wow that was interesting never going to forget tailgate saying love me oh tailgate I love your story.
| Crazygrrl XD chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Hmm... I think it would be cute if there was one more chapter where they finished their talk ( It seemed incomplete to me), then maybe a make-up frag? Hehehe...
But if you want to leave it at that, it's fine I loved the story! Tailgate was such a cutie, and a little sex kitten, Cyclonus is a lucky mech ;). Good job!
| Yoru Hana1 chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Tailgate never did tell him he loved him, though I have to wonder if Cyclonus even noticed the little "Love me...?" He snuck in since he didn't say anything. Or maybe he just thought it was a part of the over-dramatics. They made some steps though, and I hope they work though it.
| DreamMaster08X chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
I really hope you have a plot bunny and continue on. This has become one of my Cyclonus/Tailgate stories to date, and there are very few that I ever see (that are good, at least) of the two. You managed to capture their moods and personalties unbelievably well, which is a hard feat to pull off in a fanfic, and you've always kept their relationship interesting from the get-go, including right now. I also love how, at first, you essentially make the pairing seemingly lukewarm and cynical, but then turn it into a very touching and effective payoff. Such a great strength in the fic.
And I understand that it gets VERY difficult coming up with further plot ideas for a WIP. I myself (as well as about every other author on this site) have that very same problem. If I had to give my thoughts on what you could do next, perhaps you could borrow some of the central plots from the MTMTE comics? You know, taking the plot device of a later comic and twist it around a little, then build the relationship around those particular plot points. I've only read about the first 11 issues or so, so I don't know anything that happens further there. I REALLY hoped this helps!
| Creepy-Pasta chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
CUTE! I WANT TO READ MORE! I actually have an idea, if you want to hear it. I don't want this story to end yet! :'( Please don't end it... PLEASE!
| Sounddrive chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Aw, that is so cute! X3 that end, fluffy feelies! Fluffyness everywhere! :3
| JetfireWeasleyThe5th chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
Oh gosh, the mental image of Cyclonus being scolded by a tiny, huffy, grumpy minibot is stuck in my head now and it is adorable. XD