|Reviews for A Proper Shot|
| Potterworm chapter 1 . 3/5
Love this too!
| VictoryNike chapter 1 . 1/29
Wait this is really really adorable and nicely written. Is there a second part?! Because now I'm all caught up in it and I want to know what Lily chose! There needs to be a sequel! Definitely one for the favorites though :)
| Fearsparks chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
It's really wonderful :D I love these one-shots :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I thought this was fabulous! I ran across this one-shot rather recently and so now I'm going to look into your other fics!
| Anon chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
How many times are you planning to kill me with you perfect stories? I am dying of Jily feels and I love it! This was brilliant and I'll never get over how you manage to portray Lily and James, because there aren't even words to describe it.
| AccioStory chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
ahhh this is great:D im glad youre still writing! i hope you're still continuing Commentarius as well- it hasnt been updated for years, but i'd gladly reread the whole thing if it was ever updated. thanks for this though!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
That was amazing absolutely brilliant! But I really oly read this because I'm still waiting for Comentarius to be updated.
| jayrambles chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Love this x)
| Rayven49 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This is so sweet :) I loved reading an entirely new way of these two to get together. Usually they just fight and Lily's stupid for a while but this was nice because she was just so confident. She understood what her body was trying to tell her and just went with it. Awesome.
Loved that it was mistletoe that fixed the potion, too.
| outcarnate chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
You're an absolutely lovely writer, and this had me grinning like a maniac by the end of it.
| Phaxsoone chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
OH MY GOD YOU'RE SO CLEVER! Loved it ;) xx
| MaryLouise1996 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Argle flargle this is literally just so much win I can't believe it! I loved it with like capital LOVE and everything :3 xxx
| Bagoosa chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This was really lovely.
| supurreader chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
| RidingonRumbleroar'sback chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Reading this made me remember how long it's been since I read a Fanfiction. So glad I read it. It was absolutely adorbs.
Keep on Dreaming!