Reviews for Within Raven
Snips chapter 5 . 10/27/2015
*pouts* That was a disappointment :/
holliswalley chapter 5 . 3/16/2015
I think you ended it nicely.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
what about when robin tells her his feelings that you had put in there ... what happens then ? please write more ...
wordmaker123 chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
write about robins jelousy and what hes gonna do and if robin will get raven
Guest chapter 5 . 5/21/2014
Well you could make robin actually try and tell raven how he feels, then (if you want) could make him try and break them up or something
S1lverblade chapter 5 . 4/9/2014
:(
Guest chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
I H U! :(
Guest chapter 4 . 5/14/2013
Is it raven and robin
DPhantom5221 chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
Oh shoonodle doodles! Please continue it was awesome and akward for a kid!which is awesome but I don't mind
j158n chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
Such a scrub
*shakes head*
The Dark Imperial chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Ice cream seller? Really? Don't fail to see anything better. But still good chapter.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Okay, I can definitely see the romance in this story but the mood seems either calm or serious. I don't see much humor. If you're aiming for a funny story, try lightening the mood and add some more funny stuff.
Werido chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
Very Nice Please Update Soon
The Virus chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
Yeeeeah No I Got None Cool Chapter Thorugh

Up Date Soon Or I'll Infect You!
j158n chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
SQUIDS ARE EVIL!
sorry watch alot of skydoesminecraft on youtube
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