|Reviews for Black Dog|
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/4
I don't remember soom of this from before when I read it but that was like 1 1/2 years ago
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/4
did you change anything in the story its been a while since I read but little things seem different not a lot but as I said little things still awesome though
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/4
nice so glad your back
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4
dude glad your back this is one of my favs love the plans for the sequels you should keep Liara in the romance with Tali and Shepard you don't see that a lot if at all
| NorthCross chapter 27 . 5/31
This review is not really about chapter, but more about the whole fanfic. Have to say that I really liked the idea of a fanfiction that, while changing bits of the plot, still was in line of ME1. First chapters made a good impression, though lacked a bit of colors. And by colors I mean that in a book you can delve much deeper into description, characters, thought. But still, first chapters were promising.
Unfortunately, nothing really materialized from these "promises". Characters were shallow and acted just weird at times. Shepard seemed like having a bipolar disorder. Not because he was so serious on a missions and relaxed on board of Normandy, no - that was actually a nice thing to see. But because his actions were just not logical and his behavior changed from disciplined soldier to psycho-killer to pile of agreeable goo in no time.
Overall logic of events is just inconsistent at times.
On the bright side - story is OKish and I think author has a lot of promise if he'll work on improvements in the areas described above. Grammar is also good, which is always a nice thing to see.
As far as now - I cannot recommend this fanfiction to anyone to read. Even if you're a fan of Mass Effect universe.
| myafroatemydog chapter 27 . 5/19
This was such a great chapter. I thought you had abandoned this fic. I'm glad you haven't
| marcus nightfire chapter 27 . 5/18
Glad your back was worried about one of my favorites
| Urdrald chapter 26 . 1/10
Hey man, I really enjoyed this fic. Did you stop writing it?
| KMF-G chapter 26 . 5/4/2015
He is Master of Death, he will Survive... and not going bawl his eyes out!
Where is his harem? Liara and Tali? Not much advancing there yet.
| Guest chapter 26 . 11/22/2014
Keep writing pleace
| rayabn chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
interested in you
How is everything with you, my name is miss Raya, i picked interest on you after going through your short profile. I really want to have a good friendship with you. Beside i have something very vital to disclose to you, but I found it difficult to express myself here, since it's a public site, Please i will like you to reply to me, through my private e-mail raya_duke
So we can get to know each other better, and also tell you more about me,yours friend Raya
| Dracorex16 chapter 26 . 8/2/2014
I REALLY love this story. Read it all top to bottom but STILL want more. Please continue soon.
| marcus nightfire chapter 26 . 8/1/2014
Glad your back
| major wallace chapter 26 . 8/1/2014
| shipwreck321 chapter 26 . 8/1/2014
amazing as always!