Reviews for Naruto the Hitman |
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![]() ![]() GIVE ME MORE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More dude |
![]() ![]() This is so bad. |
![]() ![]() Naruhina like that's new. Think of something that hasn't been fucking overused |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude/dudet ... this is AWESOME ! this is the only cross-over with hitman/naruto AWESOME job dude/dudet dadman9994 |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please this is so good and i want to know what will happen next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you gave the characters a little more detail and emotion, like if 47 was angry or displeased with the villagers actions. instead, I was just "naruto was getting beat up, 47 saved him and now he just suddenly wants to adopt him.". I mean there's nothing wrong with that plot, but you should put a little more detail in your characters bro. That being said, I'm somewhat interested in the direction this story will go regarding naruto's jutsu. |
![]() ![]() Continue on I think naruto should be trained by agent 47 then gets accepted into the ninja academy. Plus naruto would look good in a suit and tie,and he can have his own customized firearms. Maybe have him be paired with hinata during the story. |
![]() ![]() Man, that was a shock. Agent 47 adopting naruto, that's crazy! i can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() Pls continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story its a good start make more please :) |
![]() ![]() Not bad for a beginning. I would definitely be interested in seeing more. I like agent 47 a lot. I just noticed one flaw in this story. The mob said/thought they broke naruto's legs. And then agent 47 tells Naruto to follow. I know Naruto has fast healing, but this is Wolverine healing. It is just to fast for Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue this story it's awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Makes no sense. |
![]() ![]() sir are you dead? because this story had far too much potential for yoy simply abandon it as you have. yes there was a few errors here and their but they could have been fixed with more details in a re-write or just in future chapters. i can get a few months given that tends to be a bad trend in this site but 2 YEARS especially with a story with this kind of potential with only one chapter and not even a discontinuing message chapter. disappointing |