Reviews for Pulling The Strings
BoombaTheSaint chapter 6 . 8/4
The writing is pretty stellar, not gonna lie, but the mc leaves much to be desired. I get trying to avoid the overpowered trope (it makes for a boring plot and a weak story) but making the mc this, dare I say, pathetic is no different. He is not ignorant, danger beyond measure looms in the distant future, the least he could do is put some obscene amount of effort into cultivating his chakra.
realfan16 chapter 9 . 4/5
Been a great adventure overall. tho I'm sad we didn't even hit the chunnin exams
realfan16 chapter 5 . 4/5
Huh epic first meeting hein
Bunny chapter 1 . 2/9
Still love this been rereading and I still read every word of every chapter, I still get absorbed by the story even when there's no continuing. I love the flow and mc and all the characters. Thanks for keeping this gem of a story up here for all these years :D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9
I Still love this. Been rereading and i still read every word of every chapter and I still get absorbed by the story. Love the flow and mc even when there's no continuing. Thanks for still having this gem story up all these years :D
Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2022
The mc is pathetic, weak, stupid and untalented. The attempt to avoid an overpowered mc went way too far.
barastyr chapter 9 . 4/26/2022
Honorifics are usually done in lowercase. Kazekage, for example, would be Kazekage-sama, with a lowercase S. Sensei is the same, though it's usually used at the end of sentences too. It's not capitalized either, though, since it's basically the same as saying 'teacher.' "Alright, sensei!" is basically how you'd put it.
barastyr chapter 2 . 4/26/2022
I'm, like, ninety-five percent certain that *any* of the names of the tailed-beasts are known to people, no? It goes by 'the Ichibi,' I'm pretty sure.
getalife1000 chapter 3 . 3/29/2022
I wanna shove my boot so far up Kazekage's asshole it'll trigger a geological event and up his skull. hoe
ReadingFenatic chapter 9 . 3/25/2022
love this
Aracertariel chapter 4 . 4/27/2021
I'm really enjoying the twins' personalities. And your Kankuro is fun. :)
GrimlocktheTyrant chapter 3 . 4/26/2021
This is really good! I can’t wait to read more. I’m a huge fan of isekais, and it’s awesome to see one involving my favorite sand sibling Kankuro!
Martial.Fantasy chapter 9 . 4/19/2021
Omnireceptacle chapter 9 . 3/25/2021
Halfway through the next chapter, my ass! 5 years, you know, just a moderate window. Maaaaaaaan, we didn't even get to the part where he starts with puppetry
Kodaky chapter 1 . 3/16/2021
Really cool plot, I was confused at first with what gender the original oc identified as a little. The political wordbuilding is fantastic. I hope someday you continue or at least out the basic of what you did have planed for this story
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