|Reviews for Want of a Home|
| Dear4Life chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
It's a good story line, but I have to say, you moved too fast into a relationship for them. It's not believable, especially for Hei's character (unless she's a Contractor with some kind of Cupid's arrow).
Please don't think ill of me, I just feel it is moving too fast is all.
One last note, there is no moon in the DTB world.