What you're calling the "Bush Series" is spelled Busch, though it's pronounced the same as "bush." And Jeff Gordon was actually one of the favorites in these parts when he was actually racing. His association with Dale Earnhardt didn't hurt, either; that guy was THE favorite driver around here! ;D

"Learnt" actually IS a word, and is the accepted version of "learned" in the UK. In fact, it was even an accepted "alternate version" of "learned" in the US in the 1960s, when I was in school. "Learnt," "leapt" (instead of "leaped;" it was pronounced "lept"), and a few others were also spelled with t's ("spelt" being another one!). In the US, there was a spelling reform in the early 1970s that saw those "t" versions removed, as well as the doubling of Ls in some words, like traveled (used to be "travelled"), etc. Sorry if "learnt" bothers you, but it is indeed a perfectly legitimate word! (Some of those t-words bother me, too; never did like "leapt. ;D)

Considering the events in "When the Bough Breaks," as well as the fact that they've helped other troubled children and even young adults, I'm not at all surprised at the reaction of Shar and Lady Ako, and I can just imagine the chaos that would have been unleashed if the rest of the Fairgrove crew had gotten involved!

crap

This the farthest I’ve ever made it in this story. If you had posted it as a crossover or at the very least mentioned at the top of the first chapter, I would have looked up the series and at least had some idea of what was going on. But since you wanted to trick people into reading it, I usually only manage to make it a few chapters before giving up. You should be up front about it being a crossover instead of hiding it for specious reasons.

on my annual favorite retreads still love this to pieces

good

Thank you for your superb work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Only negative point….. it’s over. Like the stile.

Not interest on how, this Is as stupid as it Is. Alao ir Will get worst. Stupid recomdarion, stupid writer and stupid MoRon behin this crap

Numbness down the left arm is not a good thing. Heart problem would be my 1st guess, especially considering Albus' age, and the amount of stress he's been under.

Loved it.
Thank you for a great story.

So much fun to read, thank you!

So... she's been keeping fragile Harry in a hostile environment because of her own pettiness? Hmmm. Interesting story. Well done. Thanks

Phew, finally made it through this. By far the longest it has ever taken me to finish a sub 200k word story. I have read these in a weekend before; but, this took many months. Just a constant struggle to force myself to read despite the constant reference to your love of watching country bumpkins make hundreds of left turns an hour. Probably ahould have just moved onto a dofferent atory months ago; but, the aunk time falacy is real. At least your writting is good, if not the constant wish fulfilment writing.

Everyone who might be tempted to read and wonder if it’s worth your time.
I have just finished

It was overall fun
Enjoyed each chapter

Great cross over with lots of interesting tie ups

Well written
Not a normal Harry Potter but a great reflection of Dumbly

I had a lot of funI would tell my friends to have a good read and laugh as much as I did.

Thanks for writing such a fun story that you let us be along for the adventure