Reviews for The Lost Boys
Guest chapter 35 . 6/23/2014
I'm waiting for the movie!
You can be proud of this, it's amazing (:
twiila1 chapter 35 . 6/22/2014
OMG I just finished your story and I can't stop crying... My favorite fic ever! ILY!
Hookedonthebluebox chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Heartbreakingly beautiful and practically perfect in every way! I laughed, I cried, I curled up in a ball and didn't move for days... Altogether, the epitome of excellence in the fanfiction world!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Wow this looks awesome thank you for writing it :D

Shit im excited. This is perfect. I know how my tomorrow is going to go.
Katsy111 chapter 35 . 6/10/2014
Awwww I just found this was posted. The end! Gosh. It's been so... Epic?! I mean this story really stood out to me in terms of how much they love each other. I kind of want to reread it again in a while. Thanks for all the effort it takes to write this, it's been brilliant :* hopefully you'll keep writing something else!
Angel Starbeam chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Hi, this is my now my favorite AU for the OUAT cast. I love every single thing this fic has. I enjoyed Emma and Killian and their dealing with their problems and lives and careers and developing their relationship. I love Emma and her family and Killian and his family. I really love the side characters.

I really like Graham being Killian's friend and Emma's bff, and he gets together with Ariel and Jefferson being a loving dad and slightly unhinged. And Fraken Wolf is here, with innuendos galore. And August, and Phillip and David, And Snow being a fashion designer who is in awe of Cora Mills. And Regina is a good guy and is happy with Daniel and has a horse ranch!

Also loved Cora one scene wonder.

I also like how Neal is done here. A lost of au fics have Neal as the bad guy (or a ghost that's briefly mentioned), and while he did do Emma wrong in cannon, Neal is one of my favorite characters. Both versions- As young Baelfire, because he was a really brave kid who did brave and stupid things and Neal because he was willing to admit his mistakes and crimes, and could not be phased by anything only look for solutions. I hated it when he died, I really did. And most works focus on his bad qualities, making him a monster who broke Emma's heart.

Here though, its okay, because its not Neal. Neal was Baelfire and Bae is Rumple's and Belle's son (did mention I really like the part where she talked him into wearing a costume? And how they work with the band? Shame on me, this was a cute Rumbelle au too) Bae is happy in this universe with his family and doesn't go through all the turmoil Neal/Bae had. So yes, separating Bae and Neal was a good thing, because Bae gets to have his happy life (and being playmates with Henry and Grace! And they go to Disneyland!) and this Neal isn't the lost boy, bravest coward, was able to do cool things and wanted a redeem himself OUAT Neal but a genuine problem that Emma could finally face and fight. Also really liked when David decked him.

Also liked what was done to Milah, being a vengeful ex and finally seeing that was a stupid mean thing to do.

And this was way too long, but really liked the whole thing and wanted let you know I enjoyed reading this.
onceuponajollyroger chapter 35 . 6/5/2014
This fic is by far the best fanfiction, CS and all others, that I have read. The way you were able to keep Emma and Killian true to their show characters while still creating unique aspects of their personalities for this story was brilliant. I absolutely fell in love with all of the characters throughout Lost Boys. You are truly a talented writer. The way you were able to make me laugh and cry and experience a multitude of emotions throughout this story was pure writing genius. I'll be back to read Lost Boys again soon because I hate to say goodbye to this story. Wonderful job, dear.
lfrendr2 chapter 14 . 6/4/2014
i love this story so much...
I am reading it again and again!
Tadpole24 chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
I'm still here! Still chipping away at this thing! Lol. I wanna read so much faster, but real life is crazy at the moment! But know that I'm loving every second of this fic! :)

I loved their phone conversation in this chapter. You've got their banter so well done - I just adore it! :)
Relliurad chapter 35 . 6/3/2014
Hey, i just spent far too much of the last day reading this because i just couldn't stop. It was so freaking awesome. I really really loved it.

I have not been that excited about a story for a long time, so thank you soooo much. I'll be rading this again and again i know.

Nothing-Everything-Something chapter 26 . 5/30/2014
Ok I love this fic! It's like I think something and you bring it ten times over! I think they're going to get together you bring heated conversation acceptance and hot angry sex... I think they're going to fall in love you bring fall hard and fast and never ever ever ever never able to get back up again... I think ok things are going to well so something bad will happen you bring Henry's custody battle milah being a bitch and Killian having to tear each of them apart to save them! Like dude stop being so fucking fantastic
humbly interpret chapter 35 . 5/27/2014
Ok so several things. One loved the idea of all of this! You created very clever relationships between characters that harken back to the show while still adding a new layer (august and killian being so close being a specific example). It was hard not to love killian and emma which was good because that is certainly who they are one the show and the banter throughout was top notch but the internal monologues, killian in particular, was wondering because it really showcased the explicit duality of his character with different people in different situations like how he can be smug and cocky while really being introverted and romantic (absolutely loved the lines about emma being an open book he could read forever).

Overall this was a great read. I really appreciated the work and time you put into it and the small things you put in from the show such as lines from characters that were new and uniquely included. Also the number of characters you chose to use is impressive. I live the idea of bar and neal being separate entities because they kind of are and it really speaks to the shows interpretation and ideas of the storybook figures versus the enchanted forest.
So sorry this is so long winded but I'm an English major so...yeah.
Only critiques I have is grammar and sentence construction. Maybe another read through to proofread would be beneficial. I noticed some awkward sentences ans it seemed like some of the phrases were slightly off but I didn't make specific notes (I read this on my phone xp).

Thank you again for the fun read. I laughed out loud quite a few times and this story just reminded me hoe excited I am for season 4 and for killian to get some damn friends and emma to allow herself to be loved romantically again and love in return!
B chapter 17 . 5/26/2014
That cliffhanger! I'm so glad I found this gem when it was already finished! I would have gone insane having to wait!
Caroline chapter 26 . 5/26/2014
I JUST READ CHAPTER 26 HOW DARE YOU IM LIKE CRYING IN THE MIDDLE OF MATH CLASS. but your writing is so beautiful and every time I finish a chapter I just hold my phone to my chest for a minute because I just can't even register how perfectly perfect it is. fabulous writing. this is my favorite fic I have ever read and I feel like I'm reading a full length novel. so thank you so much for giving this to me. you're amazing
Tadpole24 chapter 8 . 5/28/2014
Awwww cut her hand hey?! Love it! I love the little moments of the show scattered in the world you've created! And love that you've given Grace some background and time in your story! She is adorable :)
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