Reviews for The Lost Boys
LoverofanAngel chapter 14 . 11/9/2015
I really loved this chapter but I got seriously confused at one point. were they sitting in a booth at the restaurant or were they in chairs cause that just irked me.
plus I think at one point you said they were standing while facing each other.
I'm so confused otherwise it was amazing
Clisa chapter 24 . 10/5/2015
Oh please don't make Neal be a meanie! I love him! I'm a Captain Swan shipper but I love Neal! And if he's a mean guy, I'm going to cry. ;-;
Guest chapter 36 . 10/3/2015
Oh I love these two.
Guest chapter 35 . 10/3/2015
Wow, I just want to say that I loved this story so much. It was a wonderfully written AU with the perfect balence between reinventing the characters and sticking to the canon. The plot was also quite creative. It has been such a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for writing it!
Guest chapter 33 . 10/3/2015
There's little I wouldn't do for you Swan.

Is thst line canon? That sounds so much like Killian. If it's not, congrats! On point charicterization and perfect balenciaga of angst and fluff.
Guest chapter 32 . 10/2/2015
She said freckle! They are adorable and I am so happy.
Guest chapter 30 . 10/1/2015
Yes! I absolutely loved the video idea and the song itself. You explained both really well.
Oh gosh, just imagining them kissing over and over for different takes and angles makes me so happy. That bet was the best thing over!
Guest chapter 29 . 10/1/2015
I don't understand Emma's hesitance to ask him what happened. Maybe at first she was to hurt to hear it, but if I'd been broken up with with the promise of a reason to be revealed sometime in the future, I'd be waiting with baited breath.
Guest chapter 26 . 9/28/2015
Oh my gosh, the whole kiss thing leading up to scene, all the kisses they've shared and now this one is goodbye. I've been there in real life and it sucks. Wow, this is beautiful.
CaptBonBon chapter 26 . 9/30/2015
I can't believe what is happening here between Emma and Killian. I just can't believe Killian would let Milah do this to him. I can tell that he has fallen hard for Emma and Emma has fallen hard for him as well. When is he going to tell anyone what Milah is making him do? I cried during this chapter and the last chapter. I so hope they get back together and all. How is the music video going to work between them? Please have there be something happy going on in the next chapters.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/21/2015
It's very confusing for me to read this story because there's no break between scenes, the next scene just starts and I have to adjust to the new setting snd characters. I'm not sure if that's cause I'm using the mobile app though.

Why are Anton and Graham working on another movie with her? I understand Graham, but why Anton? It's kind of unlikely that the director would want to use actors Emma had already worked with.
CaptBonBon chapter 13 . 9/22/2015
OMG! I so wanna see those pics. Must have been funny as hell.
Guest chapter 19 . 9/20/2015
I'm a bit confused. When Emma was nervous before the movie started was it Graham or Killian thst held her hand?
CaptBonBon chapter 10 . 9/22/2015
Just had a question about the end of this chapter. What did he mean by hope that she liked their song? Was it playing somewhere?
Guest chapter 18 . 9/19/2015
Oh my gosh the freckle code is the BEST!
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