Reviews for A Day of Shopping |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure how on earth someone could mistake Yami's Senen Eye for a rash. This chapter is REALLY funny ... MUST READ MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bakura is being paranoid ... as usual ... this is a truly evil thing to do. Bakura seems to be having temper tantrums fairly often. ...I really hope you never let Bakura cook! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're DRUNK! Hee hee hee! The aibous really aren't innocent, they are being *evil*... I really like this story! |
![]() ![]() *LAUGHING MY BUTT OFF!* XD XD XD XD! I laughed so hard I cried! XD! Please write more! _ |
![]() ![]() Oooo! Why didn't Yami let Bakura stay out in the vehicle while Yami could have the bed? Oh well, more fun arguing! I could see them fighting over the tv and who gets the bed or the floor. please continue. |
![]() ![]() Please continue. I can't wait to find out what happen to them. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() your stories bring tears to my eyes... -maybe that's just because I've been staring at the screen for over an hour and my eyes have gone wattery but who knows? it might be different... Soul: The chibi's are attacking! Chibi Soul: DIE - Soul: **Drops dead** Chibi Soul: That's not funny. LIVE! - Soul: Gets up from her "coma" What happened? Chibi Soul: DIE! - Soul: Points a finger st her chibi and says, "You evil bastardess!" Chibi Soul: **Turns into Soul with LONG black hair with silver streaks in it, with green eyes, and Black leather coat and skirt. white shirt underneath that says, "I love Ryou and Bakura" Bastardess Soul: I LOVE being the Bastardess - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every chapter you write is great... I love the story. :) HILARIOUS! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAHHAHAHAHHAHAH! This is great! I love it! |
![]() ![]() NO! You can't write any more chappies, or my parents will send me to a mental institute for laughing too hard! J/K ;) Lol, that was funny! Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() *rolling on the floor laughing* Oh that was hilarious! I love it, I love it! ...even though I just found this fic. Update soon, please! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! I love it! More! *burns homework* NOW MUST UPDATE MOOOOOOOOOOOORE! *stamps foot* ...onegai? ~Neko-chan |
![]() ![]() XD! Great story, this is one of the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Though I have to say that I think I found the first few chapters a bit too funny, what with my being a cashier at a grocery store and all.. why doesn't anything like that ever happen at Safeway? If I hadn't read the title of Ch 6, I would have thought they would take the bus instead of find a place to stay... public transit, the bane of existance. Anyways, great job Update soon Skye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Motels scare me... ok but you WONT have them liking each other ryte? it's only Yami/Hikari stuff ryte? uhm...hahah ryte den... Great so far! enev thou updating is a little rough... |
![]() ![]() ![]() GODDESS. That was...the best Yuugiou fanfiction I have *EVER* read. XDXDXD ...achem. _ The humor was great! You have to get another chapter up as quickly as you can write another. o_o I know what it's like to go through dry spells...*shiver* T_T The Fairy Tales were so...DEAD. ...O_O Anyway. _ I loved all of it! You have got to keep going. XD I'll keep checking. This is going in the favorites! ~Sakki-san~ |