Reviews for Hell Week
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
I love the idea and the first chapter. It had a great plotline and I was excited but chapter 2 confused me. He just snapped at the team, his family, friends, lancer and valerie, but in chapter 2 no one has any clue anymore? If this is a hell week oneahot drabble thing it would make more sense but since it is portrayed in description of a story it just confuses me. Love the first chapter though
Emmazippy577 chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
BOOM SHAKA-LAKA! Dats how da dynamite go! Wooh!
scheffelman chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
Not completed
scheffelman chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Jesus. You hit the nail on the head with the title.
Sullina3 chapter 3 . 8/15/2014
you didnt quit this story did you? its WAAAAY to great to not continue! i really like it and i dont think i'm the only one who looks forward to new chapters
Bibbledoo chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Dash, you ruined it.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
This is pussy shit. This will not give anyone nightmares and do you really think that you can sue someone the way you suggested.
vampireacademygirls chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
That was good, it was nice seeing Danny snap
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
Then what happens next
Lioness Deity chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
I've read creepy pasta! Do you really think that scene's gonna bother me?
darkangeloflove15 chapter 2 . 10/4/2013
Are you going to add more? Please do! I like when Danny kicks Dashes ass... Sorry if the language bothers you :) Good job with the fight scenes!
Violentshadow chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I loved this so much! Dash got his butt handed to him and Mr. Lancer just watched this is amazing!
Inviso-Al chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
Loved the story! You gonna write another chapter to this?
Kuroi-Ookami-san chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Holy fucking shit... You are an amazing writer. I actually cried too... Well keep up the awesomeness, have a nice day
1phantom chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
Hey!
And you think I couldn't handle it!
Ha!
I'm 12 and a half!
I've read worse. But I'm not saying that this wasint interesting, its great!
OK, see ya!
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