|Reviews for Rueful|
| Flaming Trails chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Wow. I wasn't expecting such a heartfelt story about Biff and his family. I like how you made him human, and maybe more relatable than he is in the movies and such. It's interesting to see a snapshot of his family, and how even he isn't immune to grief or loss. And I rather like how he's aware of his flaws, and he wants his son to be better. Very good job.
A quick formatting note, though - one missed italics tag after "who he was" has italicized the entire page. Dunno why it's affecting everything AFTER the story as well as the story itself, but - figured I'd bring it to your attention.