|Reviews for Striving For Greatness|
| PizzaLamper chapter 7 . 2/24
CHAPTER 8 WHERE?!
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/10
What happen to the next chapter Cam?
| Fang Yamaha chapter 7 . 1/24
Please make more chapters
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/24/2016
| Astroman1000 chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
time out why did you have Tsume become a mother at 14? Thats early by most standards even medieval people waited til 16ish. I only say it cuz i cant see any ninja having a child that young i mean being an ninja is a career and a 14 year old would have just started that career. A child is economic suicide. her (and mikoto) being around 35 to 40 makes way more sense. especially as she is a clan head!
it would also kill any "we were your moms friends" talks/explanations because Kushina and Minato were canonically in their later 20s when Kyuubi attacked.
meh make the lemons good ill get over it
| Sebastian817 chapter 7 . 10/18/2016
| Reaper4991 chapter 5 . 9/9/2016
Have you considered, and I apologize if you listed these and I just missed them: Temari
Shukaku (the demon, shikamaru's father is Shikaku)
There is a girl NAMED Shizuka
Chomei (Seven tails)
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/25/2016
| Spetsnaz Pinkie Pie chapter 7 . 8/17/2016
Why? Why did you stop writing this?!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
Hinata's mother is hitomi
| Blood4my chapter 7 . 7/23/2016
that one and mutch others from you are so nice sadly so long no update
| AmaterasuTSG chapter 7 . 6/28/2016
I'm guessing Nagato is a girl and you did an amazing job but can you plz update
| psychopath556 chapter 7 . 6/15/2016
Great fiction absolutely brilliant OP naruto, slight bashing, emotional moments and 4th wall breaking here and there, one of the best I've read, great lemon too, please continue soon I need more!
| Naruto fanfic club chapter 7 . 5/21/2016
Love the story
| brandonsamsmith chapter 2 . 5/18/2016