Reviews for Daughter of The Death God
Astera Anthem chapter 20 . 4/24
Even though there may be grammar mistakes. It's still a wonderful story and my heart is sad for Aiyana. DDD:
Cookies chapter 5 . 4/15
Heh, Akuma going to get it's butt whooped.
Cookies chapter 4 . 4/15
Ah, her child form is cute.
Cookies chapter 2 . 4/15
Nice job on this chapter.
Cookies chapter 1 . 4/15
Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. Poor Girl, I feel like crying.
heleana1 chapter 20 . 3/30
Please update!
Rita Hearts chapter 20 . 11/9/2014
Managed to read all the updates. I need to get on more often!
someone01 chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
wow that's amazing. I'm very impressed. _
Samchan134 chapter 20 . 8/25/2014
So sad D':
Why? Why? Why can't she be with the one she love? WHY?! D'X
HalloweenNight chapter 20 . 8/25/2014
I love it...and I did cry a lot! D'X
Poor, poor Aiyana...I pity for you
Guest chapter 3 . 8/16/2014
Alright the story line is intriguing, but the grammar is so off putting!
Don't be offended or anything, but I would strongly advise improving your grammar before continuing any stories, it is just too annoying trying to read something and it's riddled with these mistakes.
try10 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Everything is too rushed and there are many grammar mistakes.
MysticalNyla chapter 20 . 8/7/2014
interesting story
ashtree423 chapter 20 . 8/6/2014
I was crying! T_T Poor Aiyana!
Chibi chapter 20 . 8/6/2014
good like all time and...poor Ai-chan ! OA OA OA OA ! by the way i like jess, so evilly yeah but still poor Ai chan *cried again* oh and I don't have going to Italy anymore, i gest you had know ha Pumkin MOA !
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