Reviews for Timelock: Five Minutes of Terror
TheNaggingCube chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Nice one. Steve's watch hahahah.
Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Beautiful! I love this!
little purple butterflies chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Loved it! I always wondered what would have happened if LeBeau hadn't let himself being rescued and pulled to shore that easily. It's great that you put the part with the wrist watch in your story, a nice nod to the actual episode! Mike being mischievous there is just fun. :)
mcatB chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
This was great, meixel! Thanks so much for sharing this!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Real good ending, loved the care and concern Mike showed toward Steve. You have great talent for capturing these two characters!
Shergar chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Great WHI for this episode. There were a few of them out there that needed this treatment!
Tanith2011 chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This is far more thrilling than the original ending of "Timelock". You've delivered a very suspenseful scene. Mike's trepidation and feeling of helplessness jumped off the page. I liked how you had Mike portrayed as not being a good swimmer - it provided the perfect reason behind his rising panic as he tries to save Steve.
Thank you for posting this here :-)
Mounty Swiss chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Don't know the original ending, but I'm sure that it is not half as good as this!