|Reviews for Airheads and Ghosts|
| lydiamartins chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
i understand what you mean, :) anyway, great chapter, but maybe you could keep the spacing a little different so it would be a little easier to read (just an idea?) thanks! "lol-ing"? i'm not sure if "LOL-ing" is something that the lyons would do with the blocks, since they seem so sophisticated and all.
anyway, please update soon?
| to kill a flappybird chapter 2 . 2/28/2013
I know we're in peril and everything but i think I'm going to video tape this. You know, so the feds believe us. And hey! Let's make a movie out of this experience! Might as well!
| splendeur chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
I would suggest not writing chapters like this, and maybe writing a summary.
Try just pulling a paragraph from what you've already written.
| kneexsocks chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
This was good but a bit short.
Note: i suggest not putting author conversation in the story but authors notes are ok
| lydiamartins chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Omigod, this seems awesome! Who is Lily, though? There's so much drama, and the melodramaticness of it all makes this so much like the original series. Update soon, please?
| kneexsocks chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Omg this is cool! Just to let you know though, I might not be able to read further chapters since I get scared of these things easily so if I don't review that is why. But update soon :)