Reviews for Lightning
NoseBridgePinch chapter 1 . 1/23/2021
Oh my god this story is beautiful. You’re a fantastic writer and I love your settings. Love your Kenny, he is so deep with his backstory woven in and your poor Stan coming to terms with being cursed as well. I’m not a cryer but this chapter had me super emotional, epically at Kyle’s reaction when he saw Stan die. So happy I found this.
Plumalchemyst chapter 3 . 11/11/2020
I loved this fic and I’m happy Kenny got someone to talk to after he comes back
dangerousphantomwaffles chapter 3 . 2/10/2019
I read this story back in 2014, back when I was in the south park fandom. I loved it then because I was in the fandom. I reread it now out of nostalgia, and I love it now more than ever! It's so good about not just focusing on one thing, but all of the problems and characters connect to each other. Normally in stories with all of the south park kids, they all get lost in the mix, but here they all have an identity and a point in the story. And Stan and Kenny are just adorable. Honestly I know this story is old, but I'm shocked that this story is just as fun a read even when I have left the fandom it's attached to.
Milk13Man chapter 3 . 6/19/2018
So uh... i ship clyde and kyle now. ALSO BADASS STORY DUDE!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2018
I do not watch South Park.
Too much... much mature contents.
This story was very nice though.
I would have preferred a softer language,
But, hey? This is South Park we're talking about!
Very good. Uhm... can you make more...?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2018
This was soo good! I would've NEVER thought I'd any of this! So far the best fanfic of my life :D
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2018
Seriously one of my faves now this was so good! I love it when a fic is both well written and has a good plot haha
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
DemonKittyAngel chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
I have always wanted to see a good 'Someone knows that Kenny dies' fic. With Cthulhu, body swaps, and messed up super heroes, this is magnificent. Thank you so much for the wonderful fic.
Kenny-TykeTales chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
Not a bad fic, with the concept being an interesting one, a story about someone else just having Kenny's curse would also be just as interesting.

The biggest downside to this whole story though, is that it kind of ignores that Stan and Kenny swapped bodies. Most of the second and third chapter really just focused on the other kids which sort of just made the whole body swap thing feel as if it were forgotten.
Poppy the Rabbit chapter 3 . 6/22/2015
This story was only three chapters, but it's better than most of the 10-30 chapter fics I've read. 9/10 fanfic right here! Incredibly well written, good grammar, AND punctuation!

I can see why they put you on the TV tropes page! Because this is AWESOME!
RoseBadwolf1000 chapter 3 . 1/17/2015
That was a sweet, epic, story and I'm really glad you wrote it.

However, did kyle and clyde keep their powers? That'd be cool...
ThoseRavenousTigers chapter 3 . 11/12/2014
It's weird that this is a fix-it fic. So weird. At the same time I really, really enjoyed it! The "you get just what you asked for" of Clyde and Kyle was interesting, and having Kenny and Stan have to deal with this new revelation (and Stan only believing him when he's the one who dies) was really interesting! You took some liberties with the lightning, like South Park usually does. The thing where Cthulu's heir-wannabe tried to have them seal Cthulu forever was cool. I still don't get how Kenny got back, but it was touching all the same. And Stan asking to remember Kenny's deaths. He can now be properly traumatized by the gore. So much as he is when all those other people die.

I have this sad, broad smile on my face at the end. The plant science project was cool. And Butters really awkwardly clowning around, except being serious about it. And Kyle noticing him acting really weird and at first giving him the benefit of lightning strike.

:) Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
That story was amazing. I have been looking for a good Kenny fanfic for weeks!
nightmaster000 chapter 3 . 4/11/2014
Awesome story.

Love the twist with Kenny being Cthulhu. Any chance of a sequel?
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