Reviews for Lightning
dangerousphantomwaffles chapter 3 . 2/10/2019
I read this story back in 2014, back when I was in the south park fandom. I loved it then because I was in the fandom. I reread it now out of nostalgia, and I love it now more than ever! It's so good about not just focusing on one thing, but all of the problems and characters connect to each other. Normally in stories with all of the south park kids, they all get lost in the mix, but here they all have an identity and a point in the story. And Stan and Kenny are just adorable. Honestly I know this story is old, but I'm shocked that this story is just as fun a read even when I have left the fandom it's attached to.
AutisticyetAwesome chapter 3 . 6/19/2018
So uh... i ship clyde and kyle now. ALSO BADASS STORY DUDE!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2018
I do not watch South Park.
Too much... much mature contents.
This story was very nice though.
I would have preferred a softer language,
But, hey? This is South Park we're talking about!
Very good. Uhm... can you make more...?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2018
This was soo good! I would've NEVER thought I'd any of this! So far the best fanfic of my life :D
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2018
Seriously one of my faves now this was so good! I love it when a fic is both well written and has a good plot haha
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
DemonKittyAngel chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
I have always wanted to see a good 'Someone knows that Kenny dies' fic. With Cthulhu, body swaps, and messed up super heroes, this is magnificent. Thank you so much for the wonderful fic.
Kenny-TykeTales chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
Not a bad fic, with the concept being an interesting one, a story about someone else just having Kenny's curse would also be just as interesting.

The biggest downside to this whole story though, is that it kind of ignores that Stan and Kenny swapped bodies. Most of the second and third chapter really just focused on the other kids which sort of just made the whole body swap thing feel as if it were forgotten.
Poppy the Rabbit chapter 3 . 6/22/2015
This story was only three chapters, but it's better than most of the 10-30 chapter fics I've read. 9/10 fanfic right here! Incredibly well written, good grammar, AND punctuation!

I can see why they put you on the TV tropes page! Because this is AWESOME!
RoseBadwolf1000 chapter 3 . 1/17/2015
That was a sweet, epic, story and I'm really glad you wrote it.

However, did kyle and clyde keep their powers? That'd be cool...
ThoseRavenousTigers chapter 3 . 11/12/2014
It's weird that this is a fix-it fic. So weird. At the same time I really, really enjoyed it! The "you get just what you asked for" of Clyde and Kyle was interesting, and having Kenny and Stan have to deal with this new revelation (and Stan only believing him when he's the one who dies) was really interesting! You took some liberties with the lightning, like South Park usually does. The thing where Cthulu's heir-wannabe tried to have them seal Cthulu forever was cool. I still don't get how Kenny got back, but it was touching all the same. And Stan asking to remember Kenny's deaths. He can now be properly traumatized by the gore. So much as he is when all those other people die.

I have this sad, broad smile on my face at the end. The plant science project was cool. And Butters really awkwardly clowning around, except being serious about it. And Kyle noticing him acting really weird and at first giving him the benefit of lightning strike.

:) Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
That story was amazing. I have been looking for a good Kenny fanfic for weeks!
nightmaster000 chapter 3 . 4/11/2014
Awesome story.

Love the twist with Kenny being Cthulhu. Any chance of a sequel?
Candie Pie chapter 3 . 1/24/2014
I can't really express in simple words how I feel about this story, so let me present to you this minific:

"Uh, take a seat, Wendy. Some things were done, and we need to talk, mkay?" Wendy took the seat across from Mr. Mackey, her air one of polite curiosity. "Now, uh, Wendy, do you want to explain to me why you threw the school computer out the window?"

Wendy looked appropriately abashed. "I'm sorry about that, Mr. Mackey. I read something distressing and had an emotional moment. I apologize and will pay for all damages."

"Mm, really?" said Mr. Mackey, his eyes knowing. "Sure you're not just jel? 'Cause I'm sure there's still room at jelly school. I can call them right now. Would you like me to get them on the line for you?" He picked up the phone. "H-hello, jelly school? I got a student here - "

Wendy erupted from her chair with such force that she knocked it over. "I AM NOT JEL!" she exploded. Her eyes glowed neon green.

Mr. Mackey's jaw dropped open, and he cowed in the wake of her fury. His expression - that of a beaten cur - struck Wendy, and she slumped into the chair that she hadn't knocked over. Her eyes glazed over with tears. "YOUR RIGHT!" she cried, breaking down completely. "I have a problem! Get me the next ticket to jelly school!" She buried her face into the palms of her hands and sobbed.

Mr. Mackey stared. "Uh - there, there, mkay?"

- the end

((Seriously tho, I was perusing the internet for some good SP fanfiction recommendations and found this. It sounded a little like the story I'm writing now so I decided to read it. Mind-blowingly good is all I can say. You must have a stupendous imagination - I found the part with the shadow-prophet-thing to be especially charming.))
The QAS chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
Awesome story! I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. The plot is excellent, the characterization is spot-on, and the writing is captivating. If anything, I probably would have liked to see Stan die a few more times, but that's just my personal twistedness. Poor Kenny, but at least he has Stan now.
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