|Reviews for In The Genes|
| raph j chapter 4 . 3/12
i luv this story!
cant wait to find out what happens next!
poor Mona :(
i died when Splinter had the "im ok with u being gay talk" sooooo funny!
| SolarStar95 chapter 4 . 1/24
Your story is magnificent. Can't wait for chapter 5. I hope we get to see more Raph/Mona moments and more appearances of Slash. This story gets better and better with each chapter. You get a thumbs up from me.
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2013
Oh my gosh this is amazing! I hope o read more.
| Winged-Wolf-Tsuki chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I ran across your pic of Ralph telling Mona to put on some clothes why'll I was browsing around on deviant and noticed you mentioned it was inspired by a fic you we're doing with your sis I found the link and checked it out its really good I haven't laughed this hard in forever I don't know witch part made me laugh harder the impromptu burlesque dance the my son's are you gay confrontation or the forlorn guys I'm a lesbian lol you also did really well on describing the horror and gorey scenes with slash and tying mona in I liked how you presented her mutation I have to say after reading your fic I keep thinking about that riahanna and emienem song I think it's called monster at least the line riahanna sings sorta fits your fic almost poeticly .er...is poeticly even a word um maybe not still I think it fits (I'm friends with the monster that's under my bed get along with the voices that live in my head your trying to save me stop wasting your breath and you think I'm crazy but that's not fair)err.. socially speaking I probably have more incommine with your version of irma lol what I'm trying to say before I bungle it is I like your fic and I hope you get a chance to add to it I'd like to see what happens next you left quite a few cliff hangers there plot wise and i kinda wanna see what happens next a lil um maybe
a lot lol
| JustReadingThis chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
I am really enjoying this fic.
I loved how you picked characters like Irma, Kala, Mona and gave them new flair and depth. The backstories so far are pretty interesting and believable. The interactions with the main cast are very well thought out. Good job.
Irma is really a delight to read.
As for Slash, the mix of wild instincts and cold cruelty is very creepy. He makes a very interesting bad guy.
I hope we get to see Angel somewhere in here. She was one of my favourites and it would be fun to watch her interact with the likes of Irma - they are such opposites.
I have to mention grown Klunk on Don's shell! It's so cool that you give him some spotlight here and there. I think those little details make the story.
I took a look at your artwork and I wonder if we will be seing that gecko girl named Molly in this fanfic too?
It's very fun to read. I look foward to see where you will take this in the next chapters.
| Blackjackthefreakpire chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
Love the way your handling the characters. And the re-imagining of the old Characters like Irma and Mona Lisa is good as well. Your not just using them as a template but giving them depth too. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see were your going with this.
Plus you made Slash scary and I like that.
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/4/2013
AHHH! I LOVE your story so far. PLEASE tell me you'll put in some Raph/ Mona. :)
| Mily chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
Great chapter! I'm glad we're now seeing Mona's personality emerge and we're learning a bit more about her past. Very interesting, I hope to see more :)
| Darth Malleus chapter 4 . 10/17/2013
I almost forgot this story was here, its been a while. Great chapter, really well written, can't wait for the next one.
| MsMarvelDuckie chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
Wonderful chapter! Looks like Mona has an interesting past- if she ever remembers it. I was hoping after the last chapter that it would be Mona, and I'm really glad to see I was right! And Slash is really creepy so far! Good to see Chaplin, too- I really liked him in the 4Kids toon. Bishop, and some mysterious abductors too? So much mystery and so many twists- I'm definitely liking this!
| MsMarvelDuckie chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
Great story so far! Enter Slash, Irma, and Mona Lisa! I love the use of Bishop and Falco here. Nice combination of incarnations characters. Keep going!
| OddballPunk chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
I gotta say amazing work you've got here. You kept surprising me as I was reading. To be honest I was expecting Irma to mutate into "Mona Lisa" there when you first introduced her, but then I thought how you've depicted Mona in your fanart and found myself groaning at the stupid thought. I've a question (but please don't answer if it ruins the plot): was Mona already mutated and was using a special concoction to allow her to revert to a human form? What Slash (was it?) said makes me think this is going to be the case.
Altogether a fantastic read that drew me in and has me wishing for more. Though I won't pester you with going down on knees and begging, I'll sit here and make puppy-eyes of hope for an update as soon as you're able to do so, no rush. I hope you don't mind the watch and favorite.
| Aster Sapphire chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
Oh my god that was...I have no words for how epic that was. It was very gritty, violent and fast paced. Action packed and suspenseful, with the PERFECT dash of humor. It was practically perfection. Amazing job my friend. Update soon. ;-)
| Funkatron chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
Ahh, so I'm assuming those syringes Turtlezilla destroyed were keeping Mona Lisa from mutating to her lizard form. Nice; can't wait to see what kind of backstory you have for her.
| Capital-C chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
This continues to be, as they say, epic.