This is my very first review on here. It’s often hard for me to know what to say for feel like I have enough to add in terms of review. But I could not go by without telling you how incredibly moving this is. I knew I was setting myself up for heartbreak going into this, but I was so drawn in from the start that I quickly didn’t care. Now I’m, frankly, a blubbering mess, and that is a compliment to your work. You’ve crafted an achingly beautiful piece here, and I thank you. This story will stay with me.

Beautiful. I'm crying.

You made me weep. Lovely writing.

This was so emotional, horrible and absolutely fantastic. Love u and hate u for dragging me into this story. But my god, what a story. U should be a writer and a screenplay writer. Loved it. Loved it. U ruined my day in the most wonderful way. Going to spend it in what ifs. And that kind of impact is one a very few writers can achieve.

I can’t remember the last time I read this story. It’s one of those I enjoy going back to every year or two. It still puts an amazing lump in my throat! the sorrow, the angst that I feel especially at the end. So beautifully written, so painfully written, my body literally gets rigid as I’m reading this story and the tears just leak through my eyes and I see the words as prisms until I blink and then it all comes back clearly. Beautiful executed! Thank you. I really do miss the SAMFA awards.

This was beautiful and devastating. Oh my. Wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing

I am amazed at the depth of this story. In 8 chapters love was discovered and the world ended in an artistic and skillfully detailed way.

Thanks for sharing

It's incredible. Stunningly. I've never read anything like it. I had to use Google translate (which is a nightmare), but this fan fiction is great. Thank you!

Wow...that was a beautiful yet gut wrenching ending that totally had me crying

This is a beautifully written story, it made me cry when they started picturing their life together. Bravo.

Wow!

Oh wow, that was heartbreakingly beautiful. That last scene where they grew old together was wonderful.

Heartbreakingly beautiful this truly wrenched my heart out int the most lovely way. The only other sty that's made me feel so down and love it at the same time is the casual vacancy by JK Rowling. I think it's because it really made me think and I could imagine this so so clearly due to your wonderful description and natural feeling dialogue I wish this was a movie it was so beautiful the ending was amazing and perfect there wasn't artificial feeling angstforthesakeofangst everything felt necassary no matter how painful it really was just right! The characterisation was lovely. Athens moment I sort of was jarred out of the story was the Vitiamin K bit it was so simple but executed so well I really see it coming and I had to step back stop reading an d realise you are really good! I really got lost in this story which speaks to awesome writing the flow was amazing but that shock was set up so well so had to appreciate it which also is testament to your great writing honestly I don't gush much but this really was fantastic! Love love love this

Oh my word, *weeping* That was beautifully written. I (painfully) enjoyed reading that.

Oh my gosh *weeping* that was amazing. The end was perfectly (painful) written.