Reviews for Strong Steele
RockRollIndieChick chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
Wonderful chapter, thank you so much for posting have been going crazy without strong steele. Love the girly night with Tiff and the phone call with Carla, I like how in your story Carla and Ana seem to get on, everyone else always make Carla a bitch so it's a nice change. I was worried Gavin had ran off back to whoever it was calling and thought yes it was an ex so I'm glad that he was working and not with this Chloe...now very excited to find out how things go with his mom...what is going on with Chloe that is so important for Gavin to be involved...more soon please...but don't feel pressured...and we certainly don't hate you :) thanks for the wonderful chapter
HappyCup chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
Oh this is awful. If she loses Gavin to someone else that would be heartbreaking. He's not even thinking about Ana. And it happened just as I was convincing myself that Ana could be happy with someone other than Christian, too. Your's was the first story I was willing to do that for.
Suzie726 chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
I am so hoping Gavin goes back to Chloe. He has always felt a little too perfect. I guess I just miss CHristian and all his shades of crazy. Great writing I just am still holding out hope for Christian and Ana HEA.
qtowngirl1 chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
Please...need another chapter soon. Love this story.
REVIEWER chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
Ok so why do I get the feeling that alot of your anonymous reviewers are the same person? This is probably the first fanfic I've ever read that has so many anonymous reviewers, especially under the name 'Guest'. You have to type that in, it isn't automatic, and how many people put 'Guest' as a name rather than their actual name or even 'anonymous'? Maybe it's just me, but 'Guest' isn't my first thought when it comes to putting a name down. Not bitching, just simply curious and wondering if most of them aren't doing it just to persuade you to keep the story Gavin / Ana by making it seem like more people are down for it.

On another note, THANK YOU FOR UPDATING. I would have actually left a review under my FF account reserved for leaving reviews (gideoncross), but it's 8 AM and I'm too lazy to log in :P
I'm not going to leave a review about which pairing I prefer as I feel like it's unnecessarily putting you under pressure and I'd rather you do what you feel is best instead of letting others influence your decision. I like this story because of the writing, because of your OCs, because Ana's in character, if a bit stronger. Not because it could possibly be a Christian/Ana story or because of Gavin. If I like Gavin (and yes, I do. How can you not?), it's for his character, not for his relationship with Ana. So who Ana ends up with isn't (too) important to me, nor should it be to anyone else, because according to your Author's Notes, that isn't even the point of the story.
The only complaint I really have so far is there isn't enough of Teddy, Tiff, or Christian (even if he's not with Ana, I simply just like his character and would appreciate more of him). Other than that, I think you're doing amazing and I'm pretty sure I'll respect your decision regarding what you want to do with this story no matter what it is. The writing would just be terrible if it was done under pressure to please everyone instead of just what you want to do and what you feel is best. All of this being said, I'm excited for the next update! I never believed you abandoned this fic, but just to be safe, PLEASE DON'T EVER. Haha xx
Guest chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
great chapter
Guest chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
phew I thought Gavin was going to go running off to an ex who he was still in love with. I hope him and Ana can sort things
mudbloodsandmurmurs chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
I'm starting think I'm very stupid for still hoping for a CG/AS ending, as there hasn't even been mention of him the past few chapters (pleaseeee bring him back at some point). As much as I adore Gavin (and I do, very much), I just can't see their relationship being a long-term one. I don't see him being Ana's HEA. But I don't want him to be heartbroken, either. Which leads me to pretty much being left emotionally fucked up no matter what pairing you choose. I wish there were more of a storyline to this fic besides Ana's relationships so I could have something else to focus on. I don't mean that to be offensive, just that I feel every chapter is about Gavin/Ana this, Gavin/Ana that. I feel like it's less of an Anastasia story and more of an Anastasia-Steele-And-Her-Many-Loves-Who-Are-Awesom e-At-Sex story. Okay, this is coming off super bitchy. I'm not a bitchy person, so I'll stop haha. I'm really glad you've updated and I hope you will do so again very soon :)
Guest chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
ah another cliff hanger... love it... keep em coming
pookiebear3 chapter 35 . 6/23/2013
well at least we know some of Gavin's baggage!
Guest chapter 34 . 6/23/2013
10 days...have you given up on us? I was so excited for more after that cliff hanger ending
Guest chapter 34 . 6/22/2013
Checked out the snippet...omg hasn't spoke since Sunday after all he said to Ray about how much Ana means to him...where is the real Gavin gone? And why has he replaced himself with asshole Gavin...please post the chapter soon
A chapter 34 . 6/22/2013
I am officially losing my mind now. Need more soon.
kiy chapter 34 . 6/22/2013
longest 10 days ever! Please post more of my fav story soon
Guest chapter 34 . 6/22/2013
I'm dying here dude! Please update soon
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