|Reviews for Strong Steele|
| LovelyLucie chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
That was a wonderful chapter. Ray and Gavin meeting went quite well, Ray wasn't too bad and Gavin saying all that about how he feels was so lovely...see Ana he does love you!
Arghhh Cliff hanger! Big f*ck ass cliff hanger! Holy cow woman you can't leave us there! lol!
This is similar to chapter 12 that was a hell of a cliff-hanger and we begged and you updated the next day :D I'll cross my fingers and go for wishful thinking and hope all our begging will pay off :D Please please please post again soon :)
| MaciB chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
People did ask for drama lol! Geez what on earth is going on...I have no clue...but I sure as hell can't wait to find out.
I'm glad to have the little detail in there about how Ana is now back to appreciating the simple normal things in life like talking to who she wants...etc, She can have that normal life with Gavin so I hope whatever is going on wont affect there relationship to much. Whatever Gavin is avoiding talking about in the kitchen isn't good and Ana not telling Gavin about moving isn't either...communication is the key.
Please please please post chapter 35 as soon as you can, I can't wait to find out what's going on!
| DandelionFace chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
Of course Gavin done a good job of charming the pants of Ray lol...I'm glad they have got of to a pretty good start.
What the hell is going on with Gavin he's normally so open and now he's had this phonecall and went all weird...Eagerly awaiting the next instalment to get a clue whats going on.
Thank you for the super chapter
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
Know what I really love about this story? The happy healthy relationships Ana has with her loved ones, so many stories have Kate, Carla as total bitches or make it out that way and Ray is always the saint and that's what people tend to stick to but I love that in this story Ana and her mom from the phone conversation they had earlier in the story get on and have a good relationship, along with Ana and Kate and Ana and Ray, I like that Kate can be the best friend who defends her friend and warns Gavin without it turning Kate into being an interfering bitch...The way you write the characters and their relationships is just so wonderful to read and I cannot wait for more.
| JuicyLucy chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
I've been waiting day and checking like a lunatic for this update lol, it was worth the wait and you never disappoint, your writing is continually amazing and the cliff hangers, twists and turns are always out-standing! Please post us a new chapter soon
| Lola chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
Brilliant as always :) I love your story and can't wait for the next update :) xxx
| Carol chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
A wonderful chapter again. Thank you for writing it and posting while your so busy as well. I have so many scenarios running around in my head about the phone call and what this ending could be...I thought at first Gavin has a secret daughter with the way he was after the call and talking to Ana but then logically in my head I think if Gavin had a child the way he is with Teddy he wouldn't keep his own child a secret, I just can't work out who "?" is...it's female but I have no idea who . I understand Gavin's frustration as well about the apartment, Ana should have spoke to Gavin about it before he had to overhear it. And the way Gavin spoke about how much he cares for Ana and Teddy and how he would do anything to protect them both, geez that was emotional. I hope whatever is going on isn't going to break them because they are so good for each other, Gavin has helped Ana trust again and built her confidence even further and that's why they are so good for each other. I can't wait for the next chapter and more of your fabulous story. I hope it wont be too long to wait
| xoxGemmaTxox chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
Thanks for the shout out I'm glad my review was a happy one for you, and like I said before this is my favourite story because you touch my heart, (you are really getting the divorce/single mom/moving on thing spot on!) with it so thank you :)
Very glad to hear strong steele will be troll free, they don't deserve a place in your fabulous story.
I'm so glad that Ray and Gavin meeting went rather well considering how the two initially came face to face, and although Ray went over protective Gavin still kept his cool and explained how much Ana and Ted mean to him and the way he said it, the things he said were wonderful, so meaningful and if Ana was still doubting that Gavin feels the same then there is surely no doubt now.
I'm so curious to find out what the phone call was and what is going on at the end...it's all too much need to know lol...Please don't leave us to long, because I cannot wait for chapter 35. x
| Joep2007 chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
? ? Who is this ? Lol
| Lexie chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
You write the best cliff-hangers ever! Seriously you must have forgot the rest of the chapter LOL you didn't actually leave us there did you?
| Ali chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
The emotions your story puts me through is crazy considering it isn't like 'big' drama stuff, but it stills get me all emotional! Gavin's words were just heart warming...I hope they'll confess there love soon :)
| Mandy chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
fabulous chapter ellabankss
| RockRollIndieChick chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
You are the best Ella! the freaking best! Your story never fails to make me smile...I just love Gavin and the things he said awww...my heart melted! He really does love Ana...I just hope whatever he is keeping a secret isn't going to do their relationship to much damage when it comes out...please post again soon and thank you for the magnificent chapter.
| Penny chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
Bloody fucking amazing story! It is one of my top 3 it's just so awesome! I can't wait for chapter 35. Cause all I can say is WTH is going on!
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/14/2013
this is an awesome story