Reviews for Relative Density
myfandomcauseshanaji chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
Beautiful story
Sia Later chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
This was heart wrenching. So much so, I'm still not even sure if he survived... lol
Nymra chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Shit. Just... shit. I have to go out in a few minutes and I'm all teary-eyed. I was trying to hold the tears desperately while muttering "No. No no no. No no no no no. Nonononononono...".
I failed like a boss.
You have a talent to convince me that the sad ending will come... I've just read Unfortunate Liminality and for a moment I was convinced that all the future without Shep that Garrus imagined was real (and my heart was being wrenched)... and the same happened with this story. You are GOOD, real good. It isn't easy for me to tear up. So... I'll be reading more of your work, definitely. Yeah, I'm a masochist.

Keep up the good job!
Skaiwa chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
What a totally beautiful story, I loved it.

I wish you'd write a whole encyclopedia about turian customs too. :)
Crystal-Bulma chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Its a very interesting writing style you used on this fic, but is really fits. I think it kinda highlights Shepard state of mind while placing you in her head. Its hard to explain, but its that feeling of being disconnected from yourself bit still aware. I'm not ashamed to admit that I grieved with her. This was brilliantly written. Continue to push yourself. ;-)
catler chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I just wanted to come back and say a few words about the writing style. I really think it was perfect for this story. For me it was like watching a movie, where at first the main scene is played out and then theres a flashback to give you context... and the whole thing played out in my mind just like a movie(albeit a short one) would. I personally didnt find it jarring or disjointed or anything like that. Basically I think Ive read this 3 times since I left the previous comment and probably will come back to it many more times. Some of the highest quality writing Ive ever seen in this fandom.
Spicy-obsession chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
A bit disjointed, but very intense; I couldn't stop reading once I started. Your shakarian-fic's always quality, especially the banter. Never stop writing! XD
catler chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
Wow. This was so heartwrenchingly beautiful. So many feels in just two chapters.
Lord of Bays chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
I got to the "3." in chapter 2 and my heart stopped.
barbex chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
Holy shit, I thought Garrus died! You almost killed me.
The ceremony was beautiful and I also liked how you showed that they may have trouble living with each other once no one was shooting at them any more.
Dani chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
You're an asshole! (I say that with a positive undertone.) But great job! You've got a really interesting writing style; it took me a few moments to get into the swing of it, but once I did, I really enjoyed it. Kudos!