Reviews for What if Katniss never volunteered? Prims POV (sequel)
Meap chapter 17 . 1/29/2015
I love the story, will there be the saving hovercraft?
Primrose chapter 19 . 9/25/2014
Please keep writing! I love this story!
Queenie chapter 19 . 8/27/2014
Hiya, I reeeaaly hope u dont end this because it's fantastic! Never EVER stop writing because your choice of words are beautiful! I just thought about it that mabey (really I mean mabey) that you could make prim say that, Finnick almost feels like the big brother that she never had? But anyway, love love LOVE your pieces of writing and I know that one day, i you will be just like Suzzane Collins ( i know that I spelt that wrong). Carry on and believe in yourself. See ya!
Love, Queenie :)
Guest chapter 19 . 7/19/2014
Please keep writing this story, I am completely and utterly hooked, I can't stop reading it!

If you need any ideas, I suggest to kind of use the movie as a guide... just follow it along, maybe even add a special new part, because I am so hooked to this story!

If you have Writer's Block, then I usually will just brainstorm and the first thing I think of is what I will write next, and so on and so on, no matter how funny/absurd/annoying it may be... try it! It really helps your creativity.

In the movie, I remember the jabberjays... or mockingjays, I can't remember which at the moment. But maybe you could do something with them, like the movie... only Prim and Haymitch go instead of Finnick and Katniss. After all, Prim is in the games now... maybe Haymitch could hear Maysilee and Prim could hear Katniss. I don't know, just a thought.

My idea for the next part, if you want to hear it, is that you make the monkeys injure Finnick somehow, so Finnick has a bump in the road, a little twist. After that, Finnick is in pain and Sofee or Effie talks to sponsors and gets Finnick sent some medical supplies. Then the group meets up with Beetee and Wiress, possibly Johanna/Johannah like the movie. And then so on and so on.

But please, don't stop writing! This book is amazing and I am absolutely in love! Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait to see your next update. :)

Guest

P.S. I will check out your Harry Styles fanfiction quite soon. :)
Primrue chapter 19 . 6/27/2014
Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeee! COME BACK! Please continue this story. This was the first story I've ever read on here . If you don't continue I'll cry and die... :,(
Katniss chapter 19 . 6/23/2014
Please, please, keep writing this story! I want to know what happens to prim!
jen chapter 12 . 6/23/2014
I love this story! The one thing I'm confused about is sofee. In the books, wasn't it annie who mags volunteered for? Just saying... Oh yeah, and did you mean for Sofee to be spelled as Sophie?
Hawk of The Blazing Sun chapter 19 . 3/21/2014
MAKE ANOTHE PLEASE! I have been waiting like, 3 MONTHS and you still don't write. WHY!?
Alexxxx chapter 5 . 3/14/2014
I think it was really original how you started the spark
Soul-Winged Arrows chapter 19 . 2/17/2014
Please update your story when you get the chance! ) I love the series, the intricacy that you put into this story is phenomenal! Of course, you don't have to listen to me.
I love you chapter 19 . 2/9/2014
please write more it's been months and I'm dying‼︎:( please
Primrue chapter 19 . 1/31/2014
Update soon Please! I love this story. It is like the BEST story EVER! Seriously it's AMAZING! And even though I dislike 1D I promise to check out the story. I am 1000 % sure it will just as awesome as this one. :)
CoDmaster975 chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Saw the movie the day it came out. SUCH A GOOD MOVIE!

Please update this story. I really enjoy it.

-CoDmaster975

P.S.
I might change my pen name to Trickz_MiNeRR so if that person reviews, it's me
PrimIsStrong chapter 19 . 12/14/2013
HURRY UP AND WRITE! and just kill Mags already
Guest chapter 18 . 11/28/2013
omg, plz start writing prim again! What happened after that!? PLZ START WRITING AGAIN!i mean how about for inspiration, the knives, or how a bout the beak? maybe the monkeys are attacking because they are thirsty or hungry or something? maybe they like to eat those beaks or something. or they know how to use them. plz use that as inspiration. if not, good luck on your Harry Styles story. Good luck.
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