Reviews for A Dark Blizzard
Littwink chapter 1 . 8/10
Wonderful oneshot!
queenlaur chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
Cool and intresting vertion of 68. I like what you did here!
Angelic Fluffle chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I don't think that that is humor... sad and dramatic, but not humorous.
ChucklingDevil chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This is beautiful. You have emotions, and definite character development, written down so well, and in such a short word count.
Wonderful work, here. I loved reading it.
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
good story
niki spade chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Aw poor pitch, poor cute jack.
Pretty as a Picture chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
The summary confused me slightly, so I decided "why not check it out?" So I did. I was not disappointed; this was an interesting story and I enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
I enjoyed this story
Avianahelena chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Aww. I has a sad now.
ScarletBoudica chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Yep, liked it as much as Hush!
avearia chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
What an adorable oneshot! Though kind of a sad ending. But then again, when Jack and Pitch are involved, it's rarely a truly happy ending.

But the parts before '68 were cute. I particularly enjoyed when Jack smashed into those lights and got half-electrocuted. "Well, that was shocking!" So very Jack. And how Jack can make Pitch laugh - it just shows how, on a basic level, Jack brought Pitch happiness. And at the end, that relationship has gone to waste.

I have two minor nitpicks: One, Pitch and Bunnymund's meeting - it seemed in the movie that Bunny was convinced Pitch was gone, and had been gone for such a long time that it was unfathomable that the Boogeyman was back. So them meeting at '68 is highly unlikely. Two, Jack seemed a touch too childish in the story. Though Jack IS basically a child, he also has a sharp wit and street smarts, and loves to banter. The dialogue at the end felt like something I might hear from someone much younger.

But, by large, those points are minor, and mostly my own opinion. The fanfiction works very well anyway, and it's cute and heart-touching. You have a very easy-to-read style that I find refreshing. I'll try to check out your other fic when I have the time. Until then, thanks for posting this oneshot, it was a nice read and I enjoyed it.
avearia
FlyingNotFalling chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
I'd love to see this story expanded on! The sort of father/son relationship you had developing between jack and Pitch was quite interesting and believeable.
Dinogeek chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
That was sad but kind of sweet but... I don't know what my feelings are doing. Good story. :)

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bloodysword99 chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
:((
That's kinda sad... :((