Good read thank you

Please update this story is so good

Per your notes. Wouldn't that much C4 have taken out the houses next to Harry's? That much concentration would cause sympathetic reactions. In fact, wouldn't it take out the entire neighborhood? Major gas and power disruptions? engrossing story. thanks

Please update this story is so good

Ughh i don't like authors who doesn't know basic psychology

When Pepper asked Clint, he shouldn't have argued his point. Even if he was not entirely at fault. Rape is still rape. He should've just apologize and shut up.

I am really enjoying this story despite normally not liking male pregnancy. So tell how did he get pregnant? Is there a special orifice? Does he have a womb?

aside from the obvious that has been pointed out about the Dub con (no it is not) it is rape, Why has Harry not used his magic! apparate whatever, and if he does not have it anymore maybe want to put that in!? that to me makes no sense

Just read the summary and ayo wtf is this

I understand where Harry is coming from, but some of his comments are starting to get on my nerves. He has a right to feel upset over what Clint did, but at the same time he is being insensitive and I did not agree with the harassment comment he made about “all” alphas.

Are we just going to look past how clint wanted to tell harry but everyone told him not but now their all acting like he didn't tell harry on his own. he would have told him as soon as he woke up but everyone told him not to

This story was really good, but I'm a little confused why even by their second child they are still BOILING water to put into the baby's bottle instead of filling the baby's bottle and heating it up in like a pan of water or something. Why would you boil it!?

This is been a really good story. I hope in the epilogue chapter that you put information about Harry's next door neighbors and about the people that run the shop (I can't remember all their names but I think there is: Sean, Joe, Paul, and I can't remember the last name).

Why does Natasha say that it had taken them a week to find Harry last time? He was with his captors for at least three weeks I thought.

Does Harry not know the disillusionment spell? Also, he says he's not good with the obliviate spell and wouldn't want to try it after Lockhart, but you should be fine as long as he doesn't point it at himself or his friend and what does he care if the enemies brains get scrambled?

I wonder if Harry went to pee immediately after he finally got out of his room. Also, Clint kind of still seems like a dick even though he went through having to deal with that enforcer treating him like he was treating Harry.