Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Harry has a third child, I recommend the name Elliott for a boy and Elizabeth for a girl... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, 3 months of PMS with no period can't possibly be worse than 8 months of PMS with no period... It's so bad I'm to the point praying I get my period soon before I end up killing someone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Justifying rape? Wow real cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us:) |
![]() ![]() Sometimes it feels like you get off on making Harry incompetent. Harry is weak, weak, weak, stupid, weak, incompetent and weak |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am put off by the summary. I have no problem with SLASH. I don't like it but also I don't hate it. I am just indifferent little on the "avoid" side but when there's rape and child involved, I hate it. Probably those who likes such topic will read but I will not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can a man cocieve a child? I mean literally and not adopted. And don't just use the excuse magic, it's pathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had a tape victim get together with his rapist and over the course of the story proceeded to destroy every connection Harry had with his past as well as making him suffer unwanted interventions and advances. I find it sad that you destroy a well written story with the idea that forced bonding can be romantic or that rape can be resolved in the manner you showed. You have talent with writing, but made some very poor choices with story direction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrible first impression. Solid thumbs down |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it and can't wait to read more of ur stories and updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Dubcon” oh that’s s ~cute~ way to say rape what kinda sick writer happily pairs a character with their rapist? I feel sick ya’ll watch out for this story it’s messed up and romanticizes rape and unhealthy relationships |
![]() ![]() ![]() Biology class was skipped eh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don’t usually do alpha-omega stories, but I’m glad I stuck around when I realized that this was one. I love that you didn’t fix all their problems straight away, and gave the story true dynamics. I am curious about the shift that took place in the last two chapters. Right after Ellis Harry was wanting to bond, but it took 9/10 years before either did the bond... just confused me a bit. Thanks for the story! KCK-Lumcer |
![]() ![]() I would be pissed if I found out that I had been raped and no one bothered to tell me. It just gets worse when they have him move in with the one who raped him without telling him. I would feel betrayed in this situation in I were harry, thinking i'm making friends only to find out that on of the new 'friends' raped me and all of the other ones knew. It is just more of an issue when you add in the fact he could be pregnant and he doesn't even know! |