THIS FIC IS SO BEAUTIFUL! IT’S DEFFO WORTH READING! Oh gosh the angst! I know that was written a few year back, actually almost a decade ago, but yeah still hoping you’d create more inuyasha/ yashahime fics like this!

"My sister would never NEVER stab me in the back!" she says as she conveniently forgets that Kikyo was the one wanting to take their brother off the things keeping him ALIVE.

yeah what could possibly go wrong here?! :D

Kikyo: I'm paying off my half of the debt as soon as possible to get it over with

BITCH this girl does not deserve a damned family holy shit (and I do understand that this is the Author's interpretation of Kikyo not cannon or whatever but still)

God's how I love them both! Ohhh

It was beautiful, although sometimes I wanted to kill you because of the anguish, it was worth the end.

The constant reference to "the miko" when kikyo's stage name is "miko" is very confusing. Also, if it were my story, other than the few times after she started working for sesshomaru, I wouldn't refer (or have him refer to her) as "Tama" outside of the strip club. You're sporadically using 3 different names to refer to the same character without any indication as to why. At this point in the story sesshomaru & author should prob be referring to her only as Kagome outside of the club. And probably not at all as "the miko" given kikyo's stage name. The story is dragging on a bit, not enough sesshomaru/kagome interaction. But it's by no means uninteresting. I would just trim it a bit and add hair more sess/kag fluff to keep the reader hooked/satisfied. Otherwise, surprisingly good story. I was weary of the stripper kagome route, but it's working. Lol. Oh also, ease up a bit on how much people stereotype strippers. Not because it's not true, but because it sounds to much like a "message" to the readers. They don't want one. They just want the story. Good job!

Oh my, my, my! You are such a talented author. I came across your tale in Dokuga, and I just couldn’t stop reading it. I loved .word! And the lemons were so damn tasty! You honestly made my mouth water for sesshy hahaha it’s filled with lemony goodness... delicious. Anyway, I am very grateful for sharing your talent without us. For gifting us this of my favs! Thank you!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic it has been a great roller coaster of a ride... in some times I thought omg really that kind of situation... but otherwise it has been an incredible read
.. aside from the grammar mistakes here and there but I cant care less when they are few and far between and rarely affected the overall feel of the fic. There was a part during the trial where you have the servant from Naraku's place testify and say her number was 22 not 24 at first I thought it was meant to be a different servant until the exchange came up about Kagome not coming back.

BUT otherwise... great job!

Thank you so much for this story. I was not able to put it down since I stumbled upon it last night. This story has honestly become one of my favorite stories I have ever read! The writing was so beautiful. And honestly, since i read the authors note in the beginning and it said it was coming from personal experience, this story touch me even more. I am already bipolar, but this story had my emotions all over the place! You had me crying, happy, angry, and frustrated. I am so sad to see this story end! I honestly wish it went on forever! I love the fact that this story was very original and completely different from what I have read online! To be honest, Author-sama, there are no words to really express how wonderful it was to read this story. Honestly, I have several other books that i usually try to read once a year, this story is deff in that category now! I can see myself reading this story over and over again.
Thank you very much!

Now, I must check on your other stories and read them all!

I noticed when sesshoumaru went to get kagome you said he left the car on and then said he started the car when he got back in it.

Goddamn it! I'm in love with your stories! they are beautiful and well-written! The Battle of Heart and Land is so far my favorite but it doesn't mean that this one isn't amazing because it Is! I haven't slept because I couldn't stop reading this! You have put me in an emotional roller coaster through the entire story! I have cried my heart out so many times that my head just hurts now hahaha I'm obsessed with you as an author! Just fucking amazing! I wish I can hug you in real life! Please keep writing because I will never get sick of your stories! Thank you so much for being a blessing to our SessKag world! Sending you lots of love

That lap dance though ahhhhhhh GO KAGOME!

Such a well written and thought out story, i love it!

Yay! Im so happy they adopted shippo

Poor shippo, you just keep beating him with the bad luck stick... much like kagome a d sessomaru