|Reviews for Untouchable|
| Heine chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Dang, ya made Akiha super scary and mean and cruel! Such a dark take on her character...wow! That's a great take on a person that could have that side under certain circumstances! Awesome work, a little sad and stuff but great job all the same!
| Faust91x chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Cruel but interesting. Somehow I thought Hisui would do something but...well it happens.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
your dialogue is completely off for every voiced character, and you've deeply misunderstood both akiha and kohaku's characters
like, seriously, we can blame a lot of awful on the tohno blood. but last i heard, inversion impulse does not apply to writing skills. therefore, i know no explanation for this poor portrayal other than... gasp
it's just plain badly written!
| toawinged chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
if you were going for disturbing you managed it, now im hoping for shiki to kill akiha and have a threesome with the twins simply because they both need him