Reviews for Breaking Point
lilyhemmers chapter 4 . 10/20
I know it’s been a while but this story is amazing! Please continue if you can, so many fanfics stop in the middle and there’s no end but you can always write more even if it’s been years since you last updated. I really would like to read more so please consider, this is such a great story and I’m so happy to read a story with a great plot line!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/18
One the best bb x r ive ever read, and ive read a lot! Where's the next chapter? XDDD
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27
Please make it more of a game between them. Him upping his game sounds . . . interesting :)
Lord Sicarius chapter 4 . 6/14
I thunk you should absolutely let her be more assertive. Raven is very confident in her intelligence, and while this may be new for her, she feels she can compete. And competition would make it that much more sexy, and a better climatic ending. As a half demon, she can really be mischievious. In my opinion, make it to where they are both trying to make the other break first. It will get to the point where both of them are too overly aggressive, and next thing you know you just have super heated sex going on. Drama ensues
Raven chapter 4 . 6/2
Raven falling apart.
Tigress9876 chapter 4 . 2/12
As raven walked out she immediately felt a presence behind her she knew it was probably beast boy but she wasn't sure so she looked behind her and in a flash she was up against the floor with beast boy on top of her looking as if he was a wild beast and that was when she noticed that she had gone to far but she was so aurused that she didn't want it to stop then she felt her self getting wet really wet beast boy noticed it to abd that sent him into a less than a second he picked up ravennand ran her in to her room not only because it was cleaner but because he knew she probably wouldn't be able to walk in the morning. Once they were in her room beast boys lips were attached to her lips and raven felt so alive but she was honestly terrified of what would happen next and just after that thought she was on her dresser and had beast boy kissing her so feaverishly she thought her lips would fall of but just as she was thinking that thought beast boy stoped and she noticed that his eyes were dark green and his hair looked like it had grown a few inches. Beast boy was so turned on but he didn't want to take her v-card with out her permission that was when he said rav I'd like to fuck you is that alright she looked startled but had no objections so with that sphe brought her to the bed. Raven was sweating now and she noticed that beast boy had taken something out of his pocket and it wasn't until he opened it that she realized what it was, it was a condom that really made her sweat beast boy felt she was nervous scared even that made him say something. Raven we don't have to do this if you don't want to as he was straddling her wasn't kissing her neck as he bit her colerbone she squeezed his shoulders and started grinding against his groin that made him moan her name and he started kissing down her body until he got to the point were he was between her great millkly thighs the place he knew oh to well he herd he heart beat speed up and her breath quicken as he slowly ripped her leotard down the middle until he was able to take it off in two pieces which left her in nothing but her cape and underwear the cape he just tore off but the underwear he left on as he noticed she was really scared. She watched silently until he started to reach for her bra and panties that was when she got up and on top of him now it's your turn beast boy she said as sexy as she could. Just a suggestion
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2016
Guest chapter 4 . 8/25/2016
Continue like this
PAndagirl53 chapter 4 . 8/16/2016
WHAT THE HELL?! What happened?! You just stopped writing three years ago all of a sudden.
Please please please pick up this story! :,0
Tasha chapter 4 . 5/8/2016
Can you please continue this story? I think it's amazing!
tedabug chapter 4 . 1/29/2016
(fanning myself) This story is hot like fire! This is a really addicting storyline and I can't wait to read more. I love this pairing.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/9/2016
please update! this is so good! i'm so sad to see you haven't updated in months! we need to see what happens next!

i like assertive raven. it was cute that she was all coy at first but now she knows she wants bb and is excited instead of embarrassed. i love how you write his animalistic side and want to see that explode when he knows raven wants him back. really want a chapter where they finally get together! and then more chapters of their relationship because you write them better than anyone else on fanfiction!

pleeeeeeeease update!
Elmo1610 chapter 4 . 12/17/2015
Ok seriously that was awesome I really do hope you go on with the story... And I reckon you should keep going as it is
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
This story is so hot! Wish you would continue it! And definitely loving assertive Raven ;)
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