with a silver swing of the bowl
[The silver seems to add an ‘off’ sense to this sentence]

The premise could’ve been interesting, but there’s really zero information to place a setting, leaving things in a blank white for want of description of the setting. In crossovers it can be as important as original stories, because you lack the defaults of a straight fan fiction. It took a while to decide who was who, despite knowing Zoe she doesn’t tend to let things get to melee if she can help it – she’s a skilled gunslinger, but the icy calm and preternatural grace made me think of River in one of her “episodes” instead of a veteran soldier. Again, some description of who, what, where, and how would’ve helped clarify that. Nyota Uhura was also pretty much absent any details that make her distinctly Nyota Uhura – substitute that name with almost any name, male or female, and the scene would still unfold exactly the same.

For a drabble, the action is well written. Heck if this was a full story scene the action would be well written .

Thanks for sharing.

This was awesome.

Nice to put these two together. Now I want the whole story.

I like. Zoe's my hero, and I can picture this perfectly.

Totally badass in all of the best ways.

Awesome