|Reviews for Jacob of the Jungle|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
your emmet went from being a gentleman to being a conniving butt rapist.
you should have had emmet break him in slow- so he started out as an idiot who wouldn't even share the bed to a butt raper in 2 days
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
You should totally do a sequel to this.
| Uki96 chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Me: I really love this short story!
Emmett: Of course i'm in!
Me: Well at least Jacob loves sex!
Emmett: Me too!
Me: Ya ya i know that already! Well i hope there will be a sequel 'cause this is really a funny good story!
| CentauRita chapter 3 . 1/7/2014
Emmett, with one of his legs raised like Captain Morgan, beating upon his chest, stated...
Me, fucking man!
Oh, so true!
| CentauRita chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
Emmett corrupting such an innocent as Jacob...what is this World...'cumming', too? ;} Oh...'Lordy'!
| CentauRita chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Hmmm...two heads are better than one ;D
| LrafaelxD chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
Aw,,,, I found the story cute, somehow, and I must say that it was very refreshing since all the other stories about this pairing would go straight into the movie. But yours I must say that I'm quite impressed that somebody made a different story, and its very good. But I recommend to work a little better with the plot line, that is if you plan on rewriting or continuing the story. I don't know, its just a thought. I loved it.
| asm613 chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
I groaned and rubbed his eyes
| magicbound chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
Definitely shows promise.
A Tarzan/Jane porn film was my first introduction to the genre, and it has always held a special spot ever since. Finding a story more or less patterned after it (no matter how loosely) is a find. That it's gay-themed is even better. Add the fact that it stars those two?
Honestly, the only thing that could make it better is when Emmett bottoms for Jacob too.
Hopfully, you'll expand this into a longer multi-chaptered fic. I'm definitely following this story and you as a writer! :D
| angeltrin1 chapter 3 . 5/13/2013
Interesting premise, I think it would be fun to see how he reacts to civilization (just like George). Hope you continue, I love Emmet and Jacob, physically they seem matched. You know...über hot!
| Michonyx chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
It certainly feels like there could be more to this story, but the ending is good. You've got a real gem here. Thank you. :)
| Weave the Magic chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
I love it! Emmett carrying Jacob bridal style, how lovely. Even the way Emmett was narrating became quite different. The spoiled lord subdued by an innocent jungle man boy. Awwww... Absolutely waiting for the sequel.
| Weave the Magic chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
This is soooo pervertedly cute! I'd like to smack Emmett's head and urge him on at the same time. ;D
| Weave the Magic chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Jacob is sooo cute! He's tarzan and a boy Lolita rolled into one. ;)
| elfprincess8 chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Please pick this one up at some point and write some more of it. It demands a longer plot! I like the idea of them going back to Scotland together but I can imagine Jake wouldn't like it there. I'd love to know what happened to his parents though.