Reviews for Jonah and the Whale
OpheliaRising chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
ohhh, I like this. it was really well written and you could totes publish it in a magazine. I like the language it was very lyrical and engaging. Interesting, and unique good job!
BelieverInChrist chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Great poem!
Thomas Finn Brown chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
A great Christian poem! amen and much blessings.
its time to duel chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Nice! Its great to see some real Christians on this site. :)
Drake the Neko chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Great poem. Although I criticize that in the first verse. Anything describing God must be capitalized. Example:
God the almighty
God the Almighty

Peace out!

Drake Kyo Yagami
Moderator of Pen to Paper
Mach the Slewfoot chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I'll be honest. This is a well-written poem. I never knew you had it in you.
Kimball20 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
It's a very nice poem, but shouldn't this be under Jonah instead of Noah? (I know both names rhyme). But other than that it's a really good poem.
Jyoti chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Nicely written :)