|Reviews for A two faced life|
| Theia Pallas chapter 3 . 2/22
and so begins harry's new life -
and the budding romance between him and mister tommy.
| AmeliaPond1997 chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
More soon please luv
| ulqui's-girl chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
OOOOHHHH! Ginny so had that coming! :D
| ulqui's-girl chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
| chickieroy chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
i like the story so far it's really good i can't wait to know what will happen next
| Soul Vrazy chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
| Elfin69 chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
About time James got what was coming to him. Now Ginny will not want anything to do with Harry since she will think that he is no longer going to be rich.
| school-hetic chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
That is brillent. I cant wait for the next chapter... XD
| Vallory Russups chapter 3 . 3/30/2013
First off, have to say that your story is very original, even for a non-magical AU, of which there are not many around. I like their personalities, because albeit heavily OOC, the relationships between characters are generally warm (except for the people you bash) and make for a good relaxing reading. A nice story to entertain myself with after some hardcore fic with angst and gore, you know ;)
Loved how supportive the characters are towards Harry’s decision. Oh, and Harry and James’s faceoff in chapter three; Harry is super cool when he is defiant and shows some spine.
What concerns criticism, you might want to separate characters’ points of view, especially in the second chapter: the viewpoints of Harry, Lily, James, etc. change so fast that it’s a tad confusing. Also, you could add some more dialogue or daily scenes, because the plentiful narrative and fast pace don’t create such a connection to the characters and the story itself as there would be otherwise.
Well, you can probably ask a beta to correct most of those trifles. Or just go through the story yourself. Or leave it like this, because your fic is quite fascinating in its own right, mostly because of the unique storyline. But, well, if you do some editing, it’ll probably rise to the status of the best non-magical AUs of the Potterverse.
Thanks for the pleasurable read!
| Foxfada chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
| petit.dragon25 chapter 3 . 3/7/2013
there has love in the air
| GothicDebby chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
lik, like like :)
waiting for next chapter, this story seems great so far :)
| melia83 chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
Non magic AU Ginny bashing great story! Very interesting plot,smooth and flowing language, well done! Update soon, please! Thanks!
| 65ashben chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
The chapter was fantastic. I can't wait for the next update!
| C Elise chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
very great !