|Reviews for Rosemary for a Forgotten Tomorrow|
| Neema Amiry chapter 3 . 3/10
| Fujimaru24 chapter 31 . 11/5/2015
for anyone that likes fatestay night due to how GAR archer is and the details of his weapons then...
this story is not for you..
of all the archer/shiro versions out, at first i was glad to find someone used my favorite version the fate extra version... the one that didnt regret his ideals and looks back at his experiences in a good light..
but i know that archer/fateextra is less cynical than other versions but in this story
he just acts like a lovesick virgin for godfreakingsakes...
there are no manly GAR archer in this...
at first chapters it tells that he has finished the grailwar in fate/extra but when he got summoned his personality turned into the emiya shirou of the first fatestay night anime...
that just got me thinking wutdufuq..
but i still read on... thats how much i liked fate stay night i was hoping that maybe later on ill get to see the points in him that made me idolize archer... but sadly nope
honestly the only time i see archer act like this in when he a master orders him something ridiculous and uses a command seal.
even the emiya pre archer character acts less like this even when in love...
so i hate you for that but nonetheless
this is a good story, you writing is great as i never really felt that i wasnt in the fate universe or nasuverse..
but really you need to improve on how to properly portray character personalities as some feel forced.
i wont forgive you for butchering my favorite archer version but hey kudos for writing a story..
i cant write one because of fear of doing what you just did
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 31 . 4/16/2015
this was awesome... i very much enjoyed it
| SacredArcheress chapter 31 . 12/7/2014
I really, really Love this story! I've read it a lot and it never gets tiring, Great job!
| AnonymousIDK chapter 2 . 8/9/2014
This was pretty much one of the best stories I've read :)
| Telron chapter 31 . 5/22/2014
AWW this was a great story and now onwards to the sequel now.
| Wrathie Winsre chapter 31 . 5/10/2014
So much fluff - so much, and so awesome fluff.
Gonna love that much. And you did put thought into the fic and all till the end.
There are loopholes here and there - especially how Rin was /so/ eager to help like an NPC.
Mooncell Hikaru is aw so awesome.
Will be totally following your Gil fic too.
till the next time
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/8/2014
The hearts of Archer & Hikaru become one
| Diclonious57 chapter 31 . 9/29/2013
Wonderful ending wonderful story
| Diclonious57 chapter 28 . 9/29/2013
| Diclonious57 chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
The dense ones are always the cutest
| Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
| Taeniaea chapter 31 . 8/26/2013
| Flyingflounder chapter 31 . 8/25/2013
Read all of this in one go. Great job! Look forward to more of your works.
| saber007 chapter 30 . 8/21/2013
Oh it was a bittersweet ending but there is hope. The knowledge that there will be a story for Gilgamesh and Hikaru gives me the will to continue on.