Reviews for The Lion King: Intertwining Paths
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12
Plz can u continue its a great story
FantasyActionRomanceGirlCraze chapter 3 . 4/11/2014
awesome job dude love the character twist you did not many people can pull it off ;)
Me chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
Please don't give up on this story! I'm in move with it!
ukweli chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Nice chapter!
Still waiting for the next...
When will you upload?
MGA-Middy chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
Polar bears are also black, their fur is clear and the white color comes from the snow reflecting off the snow! (I think that's what I was told...)
VONDON WILES chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
GuardianSaint chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
This is good...funny! Don't touch my mane when it's grown! That was Funny. Knowing that when their older nala's going to be all in it. Please post soon
Milamber chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
Lol, awesome chapter I really enjoy this story, so I really hope you will be able to post the rest as quickly as you can ;)

I really love Nala and Simba in this story. Nala as the princess and Simba as an outsider is an original scenario. I can't wait to see their future relationship, and seeing if Simba will agree to become Nala's king :p

PS: It cracks me up to see Nala dominate Simba like this lol. You do a great job in writing their banter and friendship ;)
Scuta5 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
This is really well written, and fascinating as well. I am such a fan of Nala, that this really caught my eye. I'm impressed with this, and will for sure read more of it. I've my own stories about Nala. I like where this story is going already. Great job. if you were ever interested in reading them, please do, and if you've any thoughts on them, please do share them.
Lion King fan chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
nice but u should have made Mufasa and Sarafina mates and Nala's parents while Sarabi is Simba's mother with a rouge lion but thats ok
kate chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
Please put up chapter 4 soon and hurry
Reish95 chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Mufasa doesn't seem to happy about Nala being with Simba. well this is great so far and i can't wait to see what will happen next!

VONDON WILES chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
Mystery99 chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Amazing you my friend desire some applause. Poor Simba (for losing parents) and I know that whole bethrothal is going to have serious consequences in the future. Please update
firelord4563 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Wow, this has to be one of the better TLK stories I have read. Keep up the amazing work, and I can't wait for an update.
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