Reviews for The Ferris wheel
AFourAddict chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
LOVED it! I can't wait to read more of your work!
fallentimelords chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
This is so amazing, I loved it!
ukjbu chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
That was awesome!
sparklevampFTW chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Oooohhhh mmmmyyy FOOOOUURR! You write him so well! I haven read a Four POV yet as good as yours! Hell, I haven't read a Divergent fic author with as good grammar as yours yet either. You are fantastic!
Emily Hart chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
omygosh it is exactly how it would have gone in the book if she had wrote it. its so good.
bekylou4jc chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Amazing! I think you captured Tobias' correct thoughts and such. I love how you portrayed him.
Very well written! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I never really saw his pov this way gives me a whole new perspective of the whole book but then agian didn't I know he felt this way while I was reading it? Guess I just never really thought about it but you put it in amazing perspective!
-guest 1
Amber chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
That was one of my favorite scenes too! I've always loved how quiet and brooding Tobias is such a cutie pie how serious he is but then he like melts around Tris... *sigh*
dauntless99 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Awesome job! This is my favorite scene as well.
tobias.conrad.cato.LOVER chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
great story. i always love to hear things from four/tobias point of view