|Reviews for Pain|
| jinxcat21 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
I liked it. Leaves everything open to interpretation, but you should think about expanding it. You certainly have the potential to do it and the story would be a wonderful read with more meat :)
| Tell me you're still you chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
This isn't a full chapter. I suggest pulling it and rewriting.