|Reviews for A New Day|
| Joker29 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
love it keep going please. I like how you switched paige and Emily’s roles of moving
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Please update this I love this story please update soon :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Please update soon I love this story thank you for writing it
| getlostandruncici chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
Hey rain, it's Cici :) Gotten back my first account here in ff..
I like that you change the orig character to Shana. it just creates more appeal and register to the readers because of the visibility of the canon character of the same name. And maybe Shana was an annoying gf at canon as well!
I appreciate the subtle ease you incorporate with Emily and Paige's scenes..and that's a good start for this Paily story..
And I love the last line saying: "Her name is Paige. - Ems". I can't help but flail with feels that Emily got it bad for Paige. This to me is a validation that Emily sees Paige more than a potential girlfriend but also that of someone whom she can rely and trust with.
| mysunshine chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
Nice chapter. Love it! Awww poor Em. Maya here is a real b*tch! and oh, Shana is totally annoying. If I were Paige, I'd break up with her over the phone right then and there, seriously. I think Maya should date Shana. They'd make a perfect couple LOL I mean they're like two evils! LOL thanks for updating. please write more :)
| dotylink64 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
Love it! I love the build up. Update soon please :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
I'm really starting to get into it! Pls update soon! :))
| Rachel Manlop chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
OMG! :') I love the "Her name is Paige" detail... it made the waiting worth. :P
Keep up! :DDD I love how Shanna is so needy. I mean, who wouldn't?! It's PM here... :)
| Del chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
actually open up to one another, or I should say that emily opened up to Paige. (: she must have found something in Paige that she could easily open up to her.
And I really didn't expect Paige to notice emily . Especially in such a detailed way. Btw, does most gay girls like plaid? Haha. I am sorry, I am just curious in that. Cos that is the most interesting logic I read.
Anyhow, I believe that both of them will eventually grow to like one another like in a friendship way first before anything progresses. I really do hope that Paige can offer to open up more about her life to emily. That would be a great start.
And lastly,who is this friend of emily that you mentioned? Aria or someone else? That made me really curious.
Ps: the little scene which u made aria giggle at Ezra explanation was really cute. I can totally imagine that (:
Thanks for the update and hope to hear from you real soon .. (:
| Nae10 chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
I'm loving the buildup to this job! ;)
| Cici chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
This is different from what you usually write rain. Its really interesting and captures Paily in a reversal of roles. It makes me smile cause Paige and Spencer are bestfriends or friends in your story! Yay :) Is Spence the tall brunette girl who she sat beside with during English? And whom is also glaring (supportively for Paige) at Emily when she heard about winning over her dear Paige? Haha...McHastings lover in here :)
THe way you describe EMily's feelings or attraction towards Paige is kind of amusing to me...cocky but alluring.. I wanna know more about this side of Paige that Emily was able to see through her exterior..
And Shana...didn't think that you'd put her as Paige's girlfriend! That's interesting to see though...
Would you let us know how Paige and Shana meet and became an item? It would be a treat to learn about..
Thanks for writing this amazing Paily AU. I really enjoy reading this :)
| Del chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
That was sure cocky. Paige oh my .. That is one side of her that we never knew. It feels like emily is of her standards/kind and I am sure that Paige will take notice of her now, especially in swimming and being partner in class. (:
And indeed, I am pretty amaze that shanna and Paige got together already and that emily is real shock to hear that Paige is just like herself .. Good one there.
But I do hope that there will be friendship blooming between Paige and emily for now ..
And yes, I am glad that u have chosen aria cos she really seems very nice in the way you have describe her to be. Gentle, friendly and understanding.
And I do hope that she can help emily to blend into this new friendship between Paige and the girls .. (:
Thanks for this update and do keep it going (:
| Darkredeyes chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Great update love your story hope you update soon...
| mysunshine chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
you asked me if I still liked it? Well, I don't like it. I LOVE it actually :) I love Paige & Emily in this story. I love an obnoxious & cocky Paige. It's really refreshing! Oh and Paige has a girlfriend? Ah! interesting. Can't wait to see how & when they become Paily. Please update soonest and thanks for taking your time writing it :) Btw, have I told you that I love your story? Oh already :P
| go-sullivan chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Oh my God. It's probably not the point but Spencer and Paige are bffs in this universe?
And heh. Em has it bad for Paige.