|Reviews for Between the Lines|
| LostFairyMantic chapter 3 . 2/10
The 1st two chapters were Amazingly adorable and I was all like awe, theyre so cute together, pity that it didn't work out. And then I read the last chapter and I'm all like well...that was ... ummmm...WAAAAAAHHHHHH! Poor Fushimi and Yata! Anyways, this story was beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. It's quite rare to find a story without a happy ending. I was kinda expecting the story to end by them dying together but I like your ending much more, it was a thril!
| TheAwesomePandaChan chapter 1 . 2/2
This was sad beautiful and amazing. I cried at the end. Misaki you idiot.
| catthegreat chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
Wow. That was. Wow. Messed up in a beautiful way. You gave me chills. Excellent work.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
omfg i live this i love this two therefore i love you thanks
| Uesugiluva chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
that was beautifully sad... i cried at the end
| ANIme.K-POP.Fan.4EVer.ever chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
Jeez man, your story is just too awesome!
It was only recently that I started reading yaoi stories and I began with SaruMisa because it made sense and I bumped into Last of Days and great, I love it!
You understand Saru's character so perfectly and your writing is flawless, your descriptions of what he feels and his actions make total sense...and this pairing is so angsty too!
I loved this story! Hats off!
_ Please write more SaruMisa!
Oh and I have a request for you...it might seem a stupid one but if you can, can you please write a story of Saru paired up with an OC girl? I don't know but its just sad to think that Saru is gonna be all alone...you can make the OC any way you want...I think it might be cool!
Anyways, thanks for such an awesome story! :D
| MinatoArisato14 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Wow, terrific story mate, love it.
| X.Break chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
I love this!
| AngelRuby235 chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
Ds chapter was so beautiful...so perfect...i was moved to tears (sobs)...at the end of it i was weeping uncontrollably...poor Saru...he needed Yata so bad!THANK U VERY MUCH for such a marvellous fic.U ARE THE B-E-S-T.
| AngelRuby235 chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Saru's POV was equally good as Misaki's...u have depicted his obsession with Yata i was right,ds fic is definitely the Best MiSaru fic.
| AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
No comments on ds fic from my side except that ds is simply The B-E-S-T MiSaru fic its perfect character portrayal,cute high school plot & typical K setting ds fic stands out as one of the Best K fics ever.
| theblankgirl chapter 3 . 6/19/2013
I really, really love this. You transformed Saruhiko and Misaki from characters that I liked to characters that I completely adore. I think they now both beat Shiro for being my favorite characters.
Also, if this is not completely canon, it has now become canon in my mind. There will be no changing this.
| TragicAtBest13 chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
My God this was beautiful! I really mean that! I can really relate to Fushimi about being possessive over a friend. Being jealous seeing them hand out with someone else and all. But I'm not that crazy like him, but you captured that perfectly with Misaki's and Saru's point of views! These two really belong together and I really love this! Again, truly awesome! XD
| IceCream9523 chapter 3 . 6/2/2013
My-my heart it went kaabooom and now it's bleeding and I'm all sad and- and I think I'll just go into a corner of my room and cry.
This story was so heartbreaking and I'm not sure whether it's good or bad thing that this is almost exactly what would happen in canon. I mean it's good that there's a fanfic which grasped the characters of Misaki and Fushimi so good. And I think that especially Fushimi was really good portrayed. But the bad thing about this fic being so realistic is that when I'll actuall read/see the canon my heart is going to break again.
Anyway, this story was so well-written, keep up the good work!
| ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 2 . 5/16/2013