Reviews for Between the Lines
I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 3 . 5/23
Saru... What are you doing? What are you saying? Why must you do this to my poor KOKORO? Saru, stop. Please. Q A Q
wewe chapter 3 . 5/14
Okay, I read this story after reading your Last of Days. and after my heart had been broken to pieces after reading Last of Days, now after reading this story it turned to ashes T-T
The angst is killing meeee
Poor poor Fushimi *sobs*
I need to read a happier story about them...
ClanRedLady chapter 2 . 1/20
I read this and the song "Creep" by Radiohead came on. So effing perfect. Excellent story telling here, I love it.
GravityDefyingTrenchCoat chapter 3 . 1/14
So I've never read Small Lost World, but after reading this I don't think I need to! This is one of my favorite fanfics & you alone have made me fall in love with these characters. So I'd like to compliment you on your outstanding writing as well as implore that you never stop!
iwillstilleatit chapter 3 . 8/21/2014
God that was GORGEOUS! I've never read a better masterpiece! Honest! O.O
Madame Songstress chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
Gah! It hurts so bad... T-T But 'tis so well written. good job
Gazingatmoons chapter 3 . 6/28/2014
This was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. It was so touching, and so sad. This was absolutely brilliant, and it's now my favorite book. Beautiful is the only word to describe it.
Angel-Amy-22 chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
. . . Holy shit. . . I'm very close to crying and my heart just got torn into a billion pieces. That was a wonderful story, how bright the beginning was and how dark the ending was.
Lady of Eryn Galen chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
I am crying, literally. This was beautiful and touching and everything I'd have loved to see in the anime. A great job well done :)
PT-chan ssu chapter 3 . 5/1/2014
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This... is too much...
Saruhiko... Misaki...

Their meeting was so sweet ;A; And Saru's situation is just too painful
Saruhiko's past, his situation, their relationship... Damn if this didn't sell like crazy if it were the official Lost Small World (lol) (yeah, I discovered this fic waaaay back but it was a gem among gems that I couldn't muster up the guts specially with how I absolutely LOOOOVE/almost died from the tragic awesomeness of Last of Days!

You are seriously the Master of SaruMi angst! Now I wanna save your latest fic for later too ;A; specialy since SaruMi seems to be on the decline after LSM... TTATT

... I love you... ;_;
TheStarWhichDreams chapter 3 . 4/12/2014
Hats off! What wonderful portrayal of the characters! I have read this fic nearly 8 times over and I have cried really hard each time,especially at this chapter. The end nearly wrenches my heart out every time, still leaving a pleasant feeling behind.
I never dawned upon who betrayed who, neither have the other two. Maybe it was like this,stupid ,From the beginning, they failed to read between the lines. Only end possible is a Blue Sword in Yata's guts and a red one in Fushimi's heart.
LostFairyMantic chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
The 1st two chapters were Amazingly adorable and I was all like awe, theyre so cute together, pity that it didn't work out. And then I read the last chapter and I'm all like well...that was ... ummmm...WAAAAAAHHHHHH! Poor Fushimi and Yata! Anyways, this story was beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. It's quite rare to find a story without a happy ending. I was kinda expecting the story to end by them dying together but I like your ending much more, it was a thril!
TheAwesomePandaChan chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
This was sad beautiful and amazing. I cried at the end. Misaki you idiot.
catthegreat chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
Wow. That was. Wow. Messed up in a beautiful way. You gave me chills. Excellent work.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
omfg i live this i love this two therefore i love you thanks
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