|Reviews for In the Park|
| Aronim chapter 1 . 5/10
That is very cute. I liked it a lot.
You have some weird quirks in your writing. Mostly how you place speech oddly inside sentences and some places where it could have been polished. Or phrases that you seem to have either misunderstood or failed to get in all the words of them.
Fun little shot thouhg.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
This is very good and it deserves more reviews.
| Forgotten Song Bird chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
OH MAH GAWD ITS SO CUTE I CAN'T
| michael06 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I love your stories about the captain of the seventh squad. you have real talent in please make more you have a long time fan.
| Thunderwolf66 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Really nice, especially cute dog Komamura! Would be nice to see him trying to use the cuteness on the other captains and lieutenants, especially if he was trying to get things from each of them :P