|Reviews for Nightmares|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
It's good, but you didn't explain when they changed locations and it got confusing where they were when things were happening.
Also, maybe italicize the dreams? I understand if you want it to be dramatic that you don't realize it's a dream, but it gets confusing once they wake up.
Overall good, (I'm actually not done yet, but just thought of this real quick)