|Reviews for My New Family|
| LilyCullen14 chapter 4 . 3/1
This is really good so far!
| LillyZ chapter 19 . 2/28
I know it's sad, but I think it also requires congratulations.
I have nnever read anything like this chapter before; it was very interesting.
| GamecockFan2 chapter 19 . 2/28
very good! :)
| sibuna826twihard chapter 19 . 2/28
Aww I loved it! Im happy that they were saved in the end, and I can't wait to see what you've planned for the final chapters. Awww final chapter :'( Bittersweet. And np, you've always got my back w/ Noon Sun :) Can't wait for the next update!
| YaleAceBella12 chapter 19 . 2/28
Please write more...
| GamecockFan2 chapter 18 . 1/30
| LillyZ chapter 18 . 1/30
Playing hide and seek when there's someone out looking for you is kinda stupid... Just saying... Not Renesmee's best call...
| YaleAceBella12 chapter 18 . 1/30
Please write more...
| sibuna826twihard chapter 18 . 1/30
Yayyy! IM so happy u updated this story hehe :) Oh no! Chloe and Renesmee! Poor Ness especially :/ Great job on the chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
| mockingjayfire26 chapter 17 . 11/16/2013
| mockingjayfire26 chapter 14 . 11/16/2013
I. do. not. like. Brian.
Other than that I'm really enjoying your story :) Your writing needs worked on, but the actual story is going reasonably- then again I am just a bit of a sucker for Renesmee fanfics lol :D
Try adding more description into your writing and remember when people are speaking, that they're not cardboard cutouts, have them twirl their hair or roll their eyes, and vary the wording you use, have people mumble and shout and tell and blather. :)
| lytebrytehybrid88 chapter 17 . 11/11/2013
How will Leah handle him being bitten?
| KittyKat1230 chapter 16 . 11/3/2013
I did not see that comingO_O
| KittyKat1230 chapter 17 . 11/3/2013
| SophieAngel69 chapter 17 . 11/1/2013
I thought you were putting Brian with Leah in this story? Or are you changing the details so that vampires and werewolves can mate in this story? How did jane manage to get to Italy and back again just like that? So many questions... Keep it up.