Reviews for White Dress and White Lies
rosaliehale23 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
This was a really cute stollry but I kinda got lost on the timeline
Abzidoodle99 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
NightmareWalker chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
i like it, even though it doesnt have alice and bella getting together, but maybe thats why i like it. its not a picture perfect ending and that's different than usual. keep it up :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Ooooh, I liked it. Although you might want to make it clearer who's talking in the future.

Actually I loved it, and i'm saying liked it just to make myself feel like a critic.
MusicLover333 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
It was bittersweet, I loved it, very good job. (:
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
You shoyld expand
fahylin chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Heartbreaking but it bugged me that she didnt follow her heart
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
That was cute! Personally, I find lesbians Very sexy ;)
Elphaba Cullen chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
VERY sad, and yet quite powerful given the tiny size and few words.

Well done.
ginger chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
wow this is heartbreaking... is this only a 1 shot?
Heart Of Vengeance chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Made me sad, nice piece of writing though. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
More please I want to know what Alice is going to do now that she knows that Bella loves her and how long the marrige will last if at all