Reviews for Derpy's One and Only
Guest chapter 5 . 12/5/2014
I love it. I'll have to remember what she said for future confecions of mine
Guest chapter 5 . 1/3/2014
nopony died ussally somepony dies jist sayin and king sombras death problems #1 already dead #2 so suddle problems with the end #1 abit rushed dont ya think #2 theres never a happy ending like that ect. just so lazy to type the rest
Guest chapter 4 . 1/3/2014
chap 4 sombra sounds like a girl like one evil blacknailing girl just sayin
Guest chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
in the middle/end part there it seemed a bit rushed but still great woooooooow story
elenahedgehog chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
come on more derpy love more snuggly moments come on... i love your story its so cute
honeydewluver00 chapter 5 . 2/20/2013
Rose Tyler2 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I'm not sure about this- I don't know why. You're formatting is unusual, first of all. Secondly, the Doctor doesn't really act like this (except for the whole butter on the couch thing.) I picture Derpy as a friendly, protective, but introverted pony. (This is just my opinion, so don't be upset or offended. I don't think she'd come out and admit her love for the Doctor.) Other than that, I like your ideas.