|Reviews for The Last First Time|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Wow very well writen! At one point you wrote something in eli's point of view and I could sooo see him say something like that!
| heidipoo chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
This was such a joy to read, and you write Eclare so well! Thank you for this very, VERY long oneshot. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. C:
| Christina8605 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
You write amazing fics and this one is one of my top faves it was beautifully written I love it.
| Alexia321 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Wow, that was absolutely beautiful and honest and candid and real. You kept in character so well and it wasn't all fairytale, but it was - which is exactly what I loved about it. Amazing.
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I really enjoyed this story.
| imoddsandends chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
This was just simply amazing. Obviously, you took a lot of time and thought in creating this story and it definitely showed. I guess as a reader you can say this is a bittersweet end to your "first time" oneshots, but it was an outstanding ending at that. Always loved reading your stories, and I can't wait to continue reading them. :)
| MyIllicitLover chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
| ChasingYou chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Oh wow, just wow. I have no other words. I could tell you how ridiculously excited I got when Eli arrived at the house, I was clapping and giggling like a mad person. And I love that Clare wanted to do it again, she wasn't freaked about doing it again, she actually wanted to do it again. I absolutely loved that.
I really hope that you are right about the sex happening on the show, I wish I was as optimistic as you but honestly I don't care that much anymore. I feel like Degrassi has too much angst in it but that is just my opinion.
Anyway I know this review is not doing justice to your amazing wonderful story but I just can't find the right words. It was an absolutely wonderful, lovely and sweet last first time ;)
| degrassianwriter chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
*creys at beauty of wonderfully constructed and written fanfic*
| literarylolita chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Well, that was certainly an epic last-first-time fic.
I loved how decidedly Eli and Clare they were...you always capture them well, but this fic felt special, somehow, in that regard.
The end with Jake had me literally howling with laughter.
And the marriage talk! The sappiness! The afterglow was my favorite part. I love that he told her he loved her a hundred times (ish) that night. The banter about thte dress being great, then forget the dress, be naked all the time...perfect.
The sex was of course hot, but the emotions were my favorite part of this fic.
THIS IS SO SAD. AND BITTERSWEET. AND...SAD!
It's likely the end of an era.
| ArentYouSophiaLoren-8887 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Awwww this was just so perfect, like everything else but I mean I really love how you threw everything at it and it felt as over-the-top lovely as we all want it to be. Particular yays for Jake telling Clare about handjob talks when he and Eli are high, and his offer to leave the house, and the whole "let's just hope he's so blazed he'll forget this ever happened" because with the exception of his offer to go to Mo's which had me going "awwww my bigbrother!Jake feelings" the others had me laughing out loud. I also loved Eli's line that Clare needs to be naked all the time and their conversation surrounding that idea. I also loved Clare wearing a thong but being uncomfortable wearing it, and Jake wearing rollerblades and telling them not to fuck in his shower, and being gooier than the brownies they were eating afterwards. But the best was touching on Clare's insecurities of sex and how Eli knows how to handle them. The fact that Clare compares the way Jake and Eli put their hands on her is a great way to underline that. Basically the whole thing was as perfect as anything you've ever written, but MORE because it had everything thrown in and then some, and then just kept piling on more "somes".
| realityescaper10 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
This was the most real sounding first time story I've read. Good job:) Eeeep! I love eclare first time stories. They're adorable
| xStayWithMe chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
I actually think this was your best story yet. Really great.
| SilverHeartt chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Using the word, "Pure." In a review such a story probably seems untrue- but it was.
I honestly have to say, your writing has progressed grately over the years. I use to have an account on here (Gothic Hearse Driving Chick) and I use to read your stories a lot.
It's obvious you have matured quite a bit, as well as your writing!
I love your Eclare Fics' and I hope to see you as one of those Degrassi fans that is still writing about these two love birds ten years from now!
I look forward to more stories, and you should look forward to my reviews!
I'd like to ask one favor of you though, if you read this, please dedicate one chapter of an Eclare Fic to me? It would mean the world to me.
Good luck with your writing!
| teasun89 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
I loved this! I hope Eclare gets it in in 12C!