Reviews for A Single Ray of Light Part Two
celajwhitney chapter 35 . 5/19
wow! that was quite a climactic ending, thanks so much.
celajwhitney chapter 21 . 5/19
egward is truly delusional!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 35 . 12/22/2016
Your Edward wasn't playing with quite a full deck here, and it was a lot of fun to watch. Thoroughly enjoyed the story and the characters. Thanks for making me laugh.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 34 . 12/22/2016
Aro and Caius will get some of what they want.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 33 . 12/22/2016
Death is going to be very painful for your Edward. About now he'd stand a better chance with Jasper than he will with Bella and Charlie, lol.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 31 . 12/22/2016
Tell me Edward's not stupid enough to kidnap Charlie, or threaten to tell Aro about him if Bella didn't go with him. Actually he is that stupid without a doubt.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 30 . 12/22/2016
Not a chance. Too many loose ends. There hasn't been nearly enough violence where Jasper, Bella, and friends get to kick ass and take names.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 29 . 12/22/2016
YES!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 28 . 12/22/2016
Go Bella! Delusional dangerous dead vampire is Edward going to be.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 26 . 12/22/2016
Emmett's a quick learner. Too bad your Edward isn't. Gonna suck to be him.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 25 . 12/22/2016
Knew it was going to be awesome. Bella and Jasper might as well be one person about now. The Volturi do not have a clue as to what they are about to unleash on themselves. Then the fight will be taken to Volterra if they don't swear to leave Bella and Jasper alone for the rest of eternity. Still think Charlie is going to become a vampire before long and end up with Esme. Almost surprised Aro hasn't learned about Charlie from Edward.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 24 . 12/22/2016
Edward may end up ashes because of his stupidity after all. None of them know Bella is already a vampire. None of them know Felix has alerted the Guardians. All of them are going to be either very dead or very disappointed. No doubt in my mind that Bella's gift is going to be the deciding factor. She and Jasper can act as one. Marcus is not going to know what hit him.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 21 . 12/22/2016
About now I'd opt for staying in Aro's shadow.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 18 . 12/22/2016
This has bothered me since Alice's rant to Rose. If Alice was born in 1901 the same as Edward, then Jasper had already been a vampire for 40 years. So how could the man who "rented" Alice out be an ancestor? Just asking.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 19 . 12/22/2016
Absolutely perfect.
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