|Reviews for Special|
| BillWrites chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This is very good, the way you are building up their relationship which is obviously foreshadowed in how they are seeing each other. However do try to watch for editing with the italic part, it was confusing to whether Rory was thinking it or it was happening. Also try to add a cliffhanger or something to keep the audience interested. This seems so much like a long short due to its short and snappy nature. Try to ease it out a bit more, make it interesting and exciting. Although, it's very well written and sweet.